-Jade- Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 Brilliant Jess! I love it! Can't wait for the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 Great work Jess. Another fantastic chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 Brilliant. I hope she can keep letting him help. More soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsamie Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 Great work as usual. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 Once again, you have aexcelled yourself with your beautiful writing. You really put your all into it and your hard work certainly pays off. A beautifully written story. And, in relation to the earlier comments of posting here or on fictionpress, I must say, I prefer them being posted on fiction press. That way all the chapters are together rather than having to scroll through pages to find where you're up to. Well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted August 22, 2006 Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 That was fantastic writing Jess, it was really emotional. You did a great job, and it was so deep. Don't worry about the offence, I think that you did it right. It wasn't too explicit but it made an impact. Poor Matilda I'm looking forward to the other stories, and the updates of these. Bring on the writing spree! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted August 22, 2006 Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 That was terrific!!! It had so much depth!!!!! I can't wait for more. Don't worry about the offence, you wrote it properly and it was terrific!!! Poor Matilda. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted August 22, 2006 Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 Aww thanks guys I'm so relieved that you thought that. I really did think I'd taken it that little bit too far, but I'm so glad you liked it. There will hopefully be more soon, and also, I'm going to be throwing out two of my ideas soon just to get your opinions... and to see how you take them all. There are so many things floating down in my head, I just wish I could stay at home and write everything down. *kicks work!* Thanks again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted August 22, 2006 Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 Poor Matilda! I don't think you overdid it Jess, in fact I think the characters in this story require something of that scale to have happened to them. I think it suits the story. Great work, really deep stuff, hope she ends up confiding in Luc about it.xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted August 22, 2006 Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 I totally agree with everyone else. I'm with Kase on this one - it wasn't too explicit but it made an impact. I think you wrote with depth but also sensitivity and to me that chapter was perfect. Not one time did I feel uncomfortable but I did feel sadness and despair for Mathilda. It was brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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