sevenpuddings Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Thanks guys Jackie, the link worked for me, so maybe if you try again now? I'm really starting to get annoyed with FanFiction.net... I think it might be time for me to get a LJ for my stories. That way I know that it will always work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Love double updates! Great chapters Jess, I really got a sense of the big climax to come and Maddie is still tugging at my heart strings. Keep trying Luke. Sorry you were in a bad place before and I'm glad you're out of it now, you know you can bombard me by PM if you wanna talk about it. It's not as if I never bother you with my problems is it? haha. Great updates though, a weeks waiting is seriously going to kill me now! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Thanks Kat I really appreciate knowing I can PM you too! But things are looking up, spring is in the air, and my writing muse appears to be getting back on track. Although, I shall give everyone a nice warning for the final two chapters, assume nothing, expect anything! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Brilliant chapter Jess really well written, full of emotion I loved it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Great Jess!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Awesome chapter, can't wait to see how the fic ends! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Thanks, I'm so glad everyone is enjoying it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Brilliant Jess! Just brilliant! I particularly like the bit at the start, all the descriptive words worked really well in communicating across what Mattie was feeling. Loved it! Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted September 4, 2006 Report Share Posted September 4, 2006 Brilliant updates Jess, I really hope Lucas keeps trying to save her. Cant wait for the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted September 11, 2006 Report Share Posted September 11, 2006 Aww no Matilda! Go back with Lucas, he can saaaave you... That was really awesome Jess. I could really feel for Lucas, and I really loved the Samson/Delilah analogy, it fit so well. It's sad that she has completely blocked him out, I can't wait to see what happens in the final chapter. I noticed that 'drunken man' passage...so Lucas has some clue of what happened now? Maybe I'm reading too much into it, and it was meant to be just a broad description. I think it's one of the reasons why I love this writing, it seems to interweve from personal to being distant a lot. It was great ! I'm so sad this story is ending, but I am curious as to how you will end it, as you did say expect anything! You should be proud, this has been such a different and evocative piece of writing Jess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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