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Awesome two chapters I just caught up on. The counseling session scene was just an out of this world amazing piece of writing. Well done

sherlock holmes a game of shadows. Loads of action and has a very unique way of taking out a Sniper in it

I liked the bit where Ruby asked Charlie to be a bridesmaid. but Ruby might have to be careful Charile don't run off with the groom. I wouldn't put anything past Charlie. Poor Xavier and Indi

Yes how awkward for them both but glad Xavier was there for April. wasn't expecting them to sleep together through. Hope your having a good Christmas

We both thought it would be a good ending to do a sequel sometime Thanks for all your comments and glad you enjoyed it.

I have just caught up on the chapters I have missed and they are really good Still Enjoying this story.

Man that was funny Leah and Elijah Adam and Eve round the house and VJ's Nudist camp idea Firing a grenade launcher at point blank range oh dearly me Look forwaard to more.

Haha, I was just thinking how well they were coping, that's normal for working parents to hand kids over to each other all the time! Ah us single people like me wouldn't know that you see

I hope this Martin guy can see Mattie point of view and let's her take on some small cases at work. finally Romeo asks Ruby to marry him in a romantic way. unlike he tried to too in the stories before this one.

That made me smile with Xavier and April denying to everyone they want to be together and are only good friends. I wonder if they will watch any of the movie when they get there

Glad to see Xavier is supportive of Ruby well for now at least I think that will change through when she takes the recording contract. Hmm still a bit worried about baby A .

Great Chapter It doesn't seem like Ric and Mattie are coping well with family life, and with Ric's business in trouble I can't see their problems getting any better.

A very funny chapter there with Brax,Charlie and Colleen their banter was great. All the food through I'm shocked Charlie didn't just order the whole menu. Yes I thought it was a bit strange that Charlie wants Brax to proposal when she's worried about money but I guess that's what love does. WOW I want Ruby's job but saying that I think there will be trouble for her Xavier ahead if she does take contract!

I didn't expect the person at the diner door to be Mike I thought it was going to be Miles for some reason I don't know why WOW at Jack is working undercover. wonder if his and Roman's plan goes right. I hope so. Oh no Lilly is in the hostage situation I hope she's not hurt and gets away safe I really do. I was bit shocked to see Danni again I really thought she could of been killed when Mike was caught. Great stuff.

Alexi is a right evil little turd isnt he Althrough he is meant to be the character we hate and rightly so. I like the tenison and drama he brings to this story. The mind boggles at who could be coming through the door at the end. hopefully they won't be hurt in anyway. I'm thinking they might get shot maybe as they walk inside the diner. Anyway can't wait for more.

Nice update I hope Baby A is ok sounds to me there might be something wrong there I don't like the sound of Steve but sounds like Ruby's going to catch a break with her singing

Fantastic start some really good laugh out loud moments. One thing I'm not too sure about through who is Admiral Pee Wee in Star Wars and which Home and away character is he mean't to be?

I have been looking forward to you posting this, looks like it's going to be very good.

Nice start Maybe Xavier could get some ear plugs seeing that Heath is his boss Look forward to seeing where this goes

Jocob continues to be the coolest kid ever. Xavier and his cooking disaster made me smile, but I'm sure he will get there in the end WOW Ruby has like the coolest job ever Sony Record Label

Yay a sequel wasn't expecting one so quickly Great start through I can see Charlie's point about not wanting to move They have alot going on at the moment. I just love Jacob makes me laugh Look forward to more.

A very good final chapter there. I have really enjoyed reading this fic, it was very well written throughout and had loads of awesome ideas and plot twists. Thank you for sharing your awesome writing talent with us. I will keep an eye out for the sequel. WELL DONE AGAIN

Last 2 chapters have been great. It was quite sad when Charlie lost her job felt sorry for her. I wonder what her new job might be? I quite enjoyed Chax's banter in the last chapter too. Shame it's coming to a end because this story has been EPIC I'm not too sad through because I have seen you plan to do a sequel. Which I will be reading.

I loved the diner scene Leah keeping Colleen in line and Jacob stuffing himself with his chocolate mud cake. I could just picture him grabbing giant handfuls of cake. I felt sorry for Charlie getting suspended. I'm liking Charlie much more in this story than I do in the show.

So it was Casey I can wave goodbye to my crazy theory then Look forward to more.