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That was a nice chapter, well it looks like everyone is going to get a happy ending here. but then again you could be tricking us. Look forward to more.

Good on Xavier doing that speech. a very hard thing to do. Look forward to more.

Oh my that was action packed. I'm sure Roman isn't dead it's just Alexi's blood on him that's what I reckon. I might be wrong through I nomally am. Poor Ella thinking Roman is dead again. she sure doesn't get much of a break does she. I feel sorry for her look forward to more.

Awesome couple of updates can't wait to see what happens when Dex goes back to school. Maybe it will jog his memory of what happened to him. You say this is the first time you have written anything like this I have to say your doing a great job I'm loving the mystery of it all.

Good stuff. It's good to see them sticking by each other even through they are struggling for money. look forward to more.

Very good chapter. It's good but sad to see how the greif of losing Jane is effecting. everyone.

it has been posted on my blog... You can find a link to the Blog on my profile .... Just click on visit my website... Is this a sequel will it spoiled the end of this story in any way?

Yes edge of the seat stuff indeed I wonder if Roman will be able to take Alexi out. Can't wait for more.

I thought Charlie held it together quite well there she didn't freak out that much. I was expecting her to more much worse. Doesn't sound good with Ruby and Xavier. Keep up the good work.

Nice chapter. Good to see they are there for each other.

Good Chapter. I found Ruby quite annoying in this chapter. seriously she can't see the big deal about canceling the wedding? But saying that she does have a chance to go on a big tour so yeah I can see her point abit I guess. Glad Xavier put his foot down through but sadly I think Ruby will pick the tour over him. I bet Charlie will drive Brax bonkers while she's at dinner worrying about the kids.

Oh dear I can't believe Mattie took on the case with Ric's garage can't wait to find out what happens there. Poor Xavier at the end.

The last few chapters have been great, lots going on. I hope Xavier and Ruby don't break up. Matt seems abit of a jerk too me, but with Ruby liking him I hope she doesn't emd up getting with him. Poor Jacob feeling left out Is there something wrong with Paige? You have me wondering because you give mentioning how quiet she is. Could you be dropping some hints there or is it just me. Look forward to more.

I echo what the the others have said that it was brilliant. Loved how clueless Xavier was regarding Rabbit. Dex3PO disturbing Romeo and Indi when they were manhandling each other. The Rivertroppers sweeping General Ferrett’s remains off the deck. and loads of other parts too it was very funny. Well Done. I will put my thinking cap on now and get back to you with the next update.

Aww poor Indi and Xavier but Indi did seem to open up abit with Ruby. I like Jane as aname for their baby Surely Mattie won't help Martin with Mrs.Conway's case seeing as the claim is against Ric quite a shocker there.

Good Chapter I felt abit annoyed with Heath when he was having a go at Xavier when he got the table wrong, and I was like Yes you go Xavier when he punched him. But I was quite shocked when Heath gave him that advice which was nice of him. It's not going to help them both running away through.

Thanks Sarah and Elissa glad you liked it.

Good to see Brax didn't mean to hurt Charlie Charlie should talk to him about the way she feels about not being able to have any more babies no good in bottling stuff up. look forward to more.

Thanks Charlieandbraxlover,mizzlette,Charlie-brax and JoiseTash I'm glad you liked it Glad you thought it was Charlie and Bianca getting married JoiseTash that's what I was aiming to make you think

First of all I'm sorry to hear about your loss hope you are ok. Sorry I fell so behind with this story but it has been ace catching up. I think Ruby will end up with that Matt guy felt sorry for Xavier waiting for her to come home. Hopefully Brax will sort himself out. I don't think he meant to push Charlie hope she's going to be ok. Keep up the great writing

That was just awesome. A very gripping mysterious first chapter. I just want more now Hope you update soon Jen

That was a very sweet ending. Glad Nicole was able to more on from her painful past and got her happily ever after with Angelo. Very good story.

Oh that was awesome. Loads of action in this chapter. you wrote the fight scenes really well Yay Rabbit is in this story now I loved how she started to play cluedo with Xavier. I loved this part had me laughing We can have a brief moment of respite from the tension of running from the Empire,” said Dex3PO. Everyone stood still for a moment, thinking. The moment lengthened uncomfortably and everyone exchanged glances. “That’s enough of that. On with the story,” said Indigo briskly, and the others smiled with relief. Hmm Yes what could this prize be that you are offering us? Is the Why are you wearing that stupid man suit? movie quote from If I'm right I look forward to you sending me my mystery prize

Hopefully they will find a way out of this mess they are in. maybe Gina, John and Bianca will come round and help them out Good chapter look forward to more.

OH I LOVED THAT ENDING Like Red I liked how Bianca realized that no man was worth destorying the world for and asking Ruby to tell Charlie that and the way Bianca got The H1000 to prove his love for her by poking himself in his eyes and destorying himself. The corny sea horse joke This Fic has been so funny and mad I have really enjoyed it