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Nice chapter. Poor Annie, It wasn't very cool of Heath to throw Belle's old carmea in the sea. Nice description of his grenade tattoo on his neck I knew as soon as I read that, that it was Heath.Looks like Matt's going to be abit of a troublemaker. :lol:Looks like Gina's money will be spent fast.

I liked Charile and Ruby's Grandma chat and what Charlie would like to be called instead that was amusing. Oh it's good to see Brax come back. I really thought something would happen to make him stay in jail longer than a night.

This chapter gave a very good insight into Romans feelings of feeling so helpless and lost of what to do to help Ella. It really showed how much he loves and misses how she used to be. Look forward to more.

Roxi died that's a shame. She should of stayed at daycare. I was abit surprised not to see Alf at the accident scene seeing as he normally there in the show when disaster strikes and a lot of people need rescuing

Firstly YAY Ruby's pregnant, I'm not too sure about her going touring though Oh dear trouble does have a habbit of finding Brax. I can sort of see why he was arrested but his right he had to do something to stop Ryan hurting Charlie. There wasn't time to call the cops really. I have a feeling Brax will be locked up for longer than one night. Ryan is surely going to show up again now that Charlie is alone in the house. Look forward to next chapter.

Oh dear this camping trip really hasn't gone to plan first they forget Roxi and now they have crashed into a fallen tree. I wonder if everyone is ok? look forward to more.

I seem to remember reading the start of this somewhere before hmm I wonder where. April seems quite psychotic I don't really trust her. Sounds like she could snap at anytime I wouldn't like to be in Ruby or Casey's shoes if that happens. I have a feeling it could of been Casey on the phone to Ruby at the end. I look forward to all the exicting stuff you say you have for this story.

Once again the twins made me laugh. Riley being impanient to becoming four so she can learn how to surf. She's only been 3 for a week Hope Ruby's having a baby

Kind of a dumb idea for Xavier and Ruby to do a runner. Wouldn't like to be them when Charlie and Gina catch up with them. I was surprised to see that VJ is so young in this fic. I laughed when Vinne said he was going to wear his Superman outfit in bed. I enjoyed that chapter.

Found Riley and Paige really funny there with Riley being so much like Brax liking the whole surfing thing. Pagie liking girly things like Charlie.It does sound like there might be a baby on the way for Ruby and Xavier.

Oh dear they left Roxi at daycare that's a big mistake to make I must say I found the fact they forgot her amusing Hopefully Indi and April can make it up.

Hey Jen Thanks your points you have made have made it clearer for me to understand why you ended the story this way. I can see you point about Casey acting out on impuse sometimes violently So I can see now how April at this moment in time is right for Dex. I got the sense that Dex wasn't fully over Casey, so maybe being with April will help him out with that. Your right about not all things go to plan in life and doesn't always turn out the way you wanted. I can see now how Dex might of wanted to get away from the danger of being with Casey. Thanks for your reply.

A good insight into Casey's thoughts I thought it was fantastic

I have to admit too I am a little dispointed too. but I enjoyed reading the chapter all the same I think it's ashame April got with Dex. I really thought agaisnt all the odds that Dex and Casey were going to end up together I think they should of just bitten the bullet and gone for it. I feel Dex might of just settled for the safest option here with April. Maybe because he was afraid of the baggage Casey would bring him. but saying all that I have really enjoyed reading this I think it has been one of my favs fics

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Xavier died shame I like him Wonder how April plans to keep Ruby and Casey apart I feel abit sorry for Ryan here. looks like he may lose Ruby here. Good chapter look forward to the next chapter.

Very cool chapter. Ryan is back man his creepy Good job John was there. Wow that house sounds like a mansion. I'm with Brax on wanting my own games room that would be very cool.

Phew Dex is ok Yes does seem like there might be alot of babies on the way.

Good to see you mixing the old characters with the new ones I should of guessed about Charlie and Ruby dont know why I didn't :lol: Look forward to more.

WOW just found this fic it was highly original and very cool. Loved it all really clever stuff. Xavier got zombie kill of the week,Gina getting drunk,Penn turning into a mutant, Nicole more interested in clothes, Jack Bauer came to the rescue Very good ending with blowing Ramsey Street up. Awesome Fic glad I stumbled upon it.

Interesting start I wonder what Ruby has found out about Charlie. and Wow Bobby's a blast from the past. Look forward to more.

Man what a jerk Heath was. I can't believe he beat his own brother up and just left him there. Poor Casey But very clever having Casey and Dex's roles reversed. Hope Casey is going to be ok. But with only one chapter to go it's not looking good. I'm hoping Dex and Casey confess their love for each other. Good Chapter

Oh I can sense some unresolved feelings between Casey and Ruby. could spell trouble for her and Ryan. could get quite messy. Good to see Heath and Bianca getting on. I'm sure Heath will tell Bianca he loves her in time. Good Chapter.

That was very nice of Jacob to give Charlie that card. Hope Brax doesn't get in any trouble if Charlie reports Ryan. Hope your have having fun with your family.

This means war it was quite good I was expecting a abit of a chick flick but it was quite funny I thought.

Good start look forward to the other parts.