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Good Chapter. Liked Ruby and Casey's chat agree with Ruby thinking Charlie makes mountains out of a molehills at times

Oh dear Brax turning to the drink again if his not careful he will lose Charlie. Hm it does sound like something will happen with Matt and Ruby I'm still hoping she gets back with Xavier. Once again that was a very good chapter.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Good couple of chapters there. Liked Ruby's TV interview Hope she doesn't end up with Matt through.

Great Stuff Darth Palmer's fatherly advice,Dex3PO's lusting after Liambacca,Xavier and Indi hoping their not related. Really goog ending.

Nice ending but it's a shame you won't be continuing this story. I was looking forward to Annie finding out too. But good luck with your own version.

Good Chapter Glad these two have got their act together and are a couple now. The ending was sweet with Xaiver asking April to be his girlfriend I found that little chat quite amusing.

I think Brax needs to talk to Charlie and stop turning to drink. At first I thought Charlie was right in saying she didn't want to go to the funeral. But what Bianca said to her does make sense.

Good chapter I have a feeling Mink might cause even more probelms for Xavier and Indi. Shame Xavier is moving back home I can understand his reasoning behind it through. Look forward to more.

Great Chapter Well for the time being I will give Brax and Bianca the benefit of the doubt about sleeping together even through I don't really trust them. Look forward to more.

Mmm The plot thickens. The Dex and Casey first meeting was very interesting. I wonder if Casey saved him from the River Boys or is it something esle Dex's head wound sounds nasty. Nice to see April is there for Dex even through she's with Xavier. Could Xavier have something to do with what happened to Dex maybe they were both fighting over April? I had to laugh at Colleen's remark to Dex about she's getting Forgetful and that it took her a long time to find her keys Very interesting update. Well Done

Very intense chapter was very gripping. I didn't really like Brax in this chapter I understand he is upset about Casey but he shouldn't be pressuring Charlie to have sex with him. and as for getting drunk Glad Charlie stood up to him. If Brax cheats on Charlie with Bianca for just for sex. I hope Charlie will end it with him.

I really thought it was Heath or had died not Casey so you tricked me there very speaky I liked the Brax and Cheryl scene you wrote Cheryl really well.

Good update Xaiver is being quite dim here sounds like April's starting to develop some feeling for him. Hopefully Xavier will come to realise that soon.

Just had a mayior catch up with this fic it's been really good as always I like the scene at the start with Jacob reminding Brax of what he needed to take to the beach It was like he was the parent for a min there I had one of my mad theory moments again in the Brax and Bianca beach scene. I'm probaly wrong but hey ho Sounds like Heath might be dead at the end what a shocker Look forward to more.

Very funny here's some of my best bits. Princess Indigo “O M G !!! You look terrible, Romeo.” Romeo Solo “THAT was TOTAL torture !!!!” Princess Indigo “Deadly BIG needles?” Romeo Solo “Worse.” Princess Indigo “Electric shock??” Romeo Solo “WORSE !!!”” Princess Indigo “What could it POSSIBLY be??” Romeo Solo “TEN rom-com holo-movies BACK TO BACK !!!! The HORROR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Princess Indigo “Yeah well, I might not have a problem BEING action girl, but I HATE boysy action holo-movies !!!” YES THAT WOULD BE TORTURE TEN ROM COMS IN A ROW I think I might of died from boredom if I had been Romeo Dex3PO [mega annoyed] “You idiot. Your repairing skills are even WORSE than your singing. My head’s on backwards, my legs are where my arms should be, and you’ve done something to my programming !!!!, cos I now I don’t have a thing for AprilD2 anymore. [kinda sexy voice] Yeah, I totally want to get together with YOU, you big sexy hairy beast.” This made me choke on my coffee Princess Indigo “Oh no !!! He’s after Xavier!!! My FAVE blonde.” Romeo Solo “But …you KISSED me. I thought that meant something.” Princess Indigo “It did. I meant that your hair is more sandy than blonde, so you’re my fave sandy AND my TOTAL fave.” Romeo Solo “Well, that’s OK then.” You can never get enough blonde jokes

That was a nice chapter, well it looks like everyone is going to get a happy ending here. but then again you could be tricking us. Look forward to more.

Good on Xavier doing that speech. a very hard thing to do. Look forward to more.

Oh my that was action packed. I'm sure Roman isn't dead it's just Alexi's blood on him that's what I reckon. I might be wrong through I nomally am. Poor Ella thinking Roman is dead again. she sure doesn't get much of a break does she. I feel sorry for her look forward to more.

Awesome couple of updates can't wait to see what happens when Dex goes back to school. Maybe it will jog his memory of what happened to him. You say this is the first time you have written anything like this I have to say your doing a great job I'm loving the mystery of it all.

Good stuff. It's good to see them sticking by each other even through they are struggling for money. look forward to more.

Very good chapter. It's good but sad to see how the greif of losing Jane is effecting. everyone.

it has been posted on my blog... You can find a link to the Blog on my profile .... Just click on visit my website... Is this a sequel will it spoiled the end of this story in any way?

Yes edge of the seat stuff indeed I wonder if Roman will be able to take Alexi out. Can't wait for more.

I thought Charlie held it together quite well there she didn't freak out that much. I was expecting her to more much worse. Doesn't sound good with Ruby and Xavier. Keep up the good work.