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I have been meaning to read this for ages. The story has a very gripping dark and strong storyline too it. Can't wait to see what happens next. I feel like I am falling in love with Ella even more in this story.

Good to see Charlie and Brax getting back on track, but I'm wondering what Jacob will make of it when he sees Brax again. Ruby and Matt are fun together but it's a shame doesn't look like she will be getting back with Xavier.

I also didn't think the suitcase could of been for Brax, maybe him moving out is for the best at the min. Yes I could sense some flirting going on with Ruby and Matt. A very clever trick Ruby played there.

Wow these two moved very fast. Maybe I should move somewhere closer to the ocean where I could watch the sun go down with a girl. Very good description of Heath and Bianca. I can sense trouble on it's way too. More soon.

April might be using Xavier so he doesn't leave her this could end badly for them both. Good update more soon.

I can understand the idea behind the controled crying thing with the kids but for 20 mins I would of gave it up by then. Brax shouldn't be getting drunk while he looks after them. He really is proving to be a idiot right now hopefully he will realise what he is about to lose quite soon and sort himself out. I hope so. Look forward to more. Very good chapter.

WOW!!! Dex's dream was very intense,creepy and mysterious. I wonder who he was meeting? I thought he might of been being chased at the school maybe? it sounds like Dex met whoever it was in a classroom? I don't expect you to answer these quetions it's just my mind going into overdrive. Loving this story.

Looks like Mink being back will be a good thing for Xavier. Hopefully she will help him to open up about his grief. Doesn't look good for Ric and Mattie through. I was going to say it looks like Sasha has a crush on Romeo in this comment, but seeing she kissed him I have my answer. But I wasn't expecting Romeo to kiss her back maybe it was just the shock of it all.

Good Chapter. Brax is acting like a jerk at the moment. I'm not sure Charlie made the right choice with leaving the babies with him. His just not in the right head space at the moment. I bet Matt felt waaaaaaaaay awkward walking in on Ruby in the shower I bet that woke him up Look forward to seeing what happens next.

Good Chapter. Liked Ruby and Casey's chat agree with Ruby thinking Charlie makes mountains out of a molehills at times

Oh dear Brax turning to the drink again if his not careful he will lose Charlie. Hm it does sound like something will happen with Matt and Ruby I'm still hoping she gets back with Xavier. Once again that was a very good chapter.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Good couple of chapters there. Liked Ruby's TV interview Hope she doesn't end up with Matt through.

Great Stuff Darth Palmer's fatherly advice,Dex3PO's lusting after Liambacca,Xavier and Indi hoping their not related. Really goog ending.

Nice ending but it's a shame you won't be continuing this story. I was looking forward to Annie finding out too. But good luck with your own version.

Good Chapter Glad these two have got their act together and are a couple now. The ending was sweet with Xaiver asking April to be his girlfriend I found that little chat quite amusing.

I think Brax needs to talk to Charlie and stop turning to drink. At first I thought Charlie was right in saying she didn't want to go to the funeral. But what Bianca said to her does make sense.

Good chapter I have a feeling Mink might cause even more probelms for Xavier and Indi. Shame Xavier is moving back home I can understand his reasoning behind it through. Look forward to more.

Great Chapter Well for the time being I will give Brax and Bianca the benefit of the doubt about sleeping together even through I don't really trust them. Look forward to more.

Mmm The plot thickens. The Dex and Casey first meeting was very interesting. I wonder if Casey saved him from the River Boys or is it something esle Dex's head wound sounds nasty. Nice to see April is there for Dex even through she's with Xavier. Could Xavier have something to do with what happened to Dex maybe they were both fighting over April? I had to laugh at Colleen's remark to Dex about she's getting Forgetful and that it took her a long time to find her keys Very interesting update. Well Done

Very intense chapter was very gripping. I didn't really like Brax in this chapter I understand he is upset about Casey but he shouldn't be pressuring Charlie to have sex with him. and as for getting drunk Glad Charlie stood up to him. If Brax cheats on Charlie with Bianca for just for sex. I hope Charlie will end it with him.

I really thought it was Heath or had died not Casey so you tricked me there very speaky I liked the Brax and Cheryl scene you wrote Cheryl really well.

Good update Xaiver is being quite dim here sounds like April's starting to develop some feeling for him. Hopefully Xavier will come to realise that soon.

Just had a mayior catch up with this fic it's been really good as always I like the scene at the start with Jacob reminding Brax of what he needed to take to the beach It was like he was the parent for a min there I had one of my mad theory moments again in the Brax and Bianca beach scene. I'm probaly wrong but hey ho Sounds like Heath might be dead at the end what a shocker Look forward to more.

Very funny here's some of my best bits. Princess Indigo “O M G !!! You look terrible, Romeo.” Romeo Solo “THAT was TOTAL torture !!!!” Princess Indigo “Deadly BIG needles?” Romeo Solo “Worse.” Princess Indigo “Electric shock??” Romeo Solo “WORSE !!!”” Princess Indigo “What could it POSSIBLY be??” Romeo Solo “TEN rom-com holo-movies BACK TO BACK !!!! The HORROR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Princess Indigo “Yeah well, I might not have a problem BEING action girl, but I HATE boysy action holo-movies !!!” YES THAT WOULD BE TORTURE TEN ROM COMS IN A ROW I think I might of died from boredom if I had been Romeo Dex3PO [mega annoyed] “You idiot. Your repairing skills are even WORSE than your singing. My head’s on backwards, my legs are where my arms should be, and you’ve done something to my programming !!!!, cos I now I don’t have a thing for AprilD2 anymore. [kinda sexy voice] Yeah, I totally want to get together with YOU, you big sexy hairy beast.” This made me choke on my coffee Princess Indigo “Oh no !!! He’s after Xavier!!! My FAVE blonde.” Romeo Solo “But …you KISSED me. I thought that meant something.” Princess Indigo “It did. I meant that your hair is more sandy than blonde, so you’re my fave sandy AND my TOTAL fave.” Romeo Solo “Well, that’s OK then.” You can never get enough blonde jokes