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Yes I liked Dex and Indi at the start of this chapter too. I agree they don't seem that close on the show these days. Love how you write all the diffrent emotions of Dex with the way he feels about April and Casey. the description of the way he felt with that river bank with being pulled in both directions beween April and Casey was really good. But sadly I can't see Casey admitting he likes Dex because of the whole River Boy thing. Look forward to the last couple of chapters to see how this ends.

Aww that was an emotional chapter. Hopefully Ryan will get caught soon, Charlie should go to the police. Look forward to more.

It will be interesting to see how Casey reacts to Ruby being back in town now. Well done with this chapter it was worth the wait. considering you said to me you found it hard to write, it didn't show.

Oh my God Ryan is a creep. For a minute there I wasn't sure if Brax would get there in time phew. On a lighter note can I sense a double wedding coming up. Really great tense chapter oh yeah loved Bella again she's my fav of the kids after Jacob.

Very good last couple of chapters. Loved Brax and Charlie's flirting about the sexy nurse outfit. I could picture Charlie wearing it. I have been finding the twins Interaction quite amusing with the whole training wheels thing. Riley falling out a tree I don't know if I was meant to find that funny but I did. Looks like the whole family will soon all be back together with Ruby and Xavier. coming back home soon. Be a shame to see this story end but if you think it's the right time for it to end it's upto you your the best judge. If you do end it Will you be writing another sequel? I would be up for reading it.

I'm surprised Brax held it together so calmly with Ryan telling him that stuff about Charlie. No way is it true I always had a feeling Ryan was abit odd. Hope Brax can see through his lies and stays away from the drink. Great Chapter.

Sasha is having a baby Wonder how her and Xav will cope great stuff.

Oh man I loved the big bowl of porridge. and everyone getting rated on their diving skills. Awww shame about Rabbit. loved how she was talking backwards. That fight scene was just so great Xavier doing a triple back flip. Really good chapter.

I llaughed a lot at the Paige and Riley scene telling Xavier and Ruby about eating Dory and the bike abit. Sweet that Xav and Ruby are trying for a baby. Charlie should throw that business card away or it might come back and bite her. Always enjoy your updates.

Great chapters Yes I wasn't quite sure if it was Melody from the show or not either. Look forward to more.

That was awesome. Ruby made me smile too. Shame April left Dex at the end to go to the party.I get the feeling they could of had a thing too. Love how she can just sense things without having to ever ask Dex what is wrong. look forward to seeing where this goes next.

In the words of Bella that chapter was just "che figo. I think that means cool or awesome in italian don't quote me on that though.Bella makes me laugh. Glad Jacob helped Ash out and got him talking that was sweet.

Heath has a daughter that was a shocker. Glad they took her in for the night. Wonder if she will cause any trouble for Heath and Indi.

Yep I would check it out. If you wrote one.

Real Steel.

Brax come on man. pop the question already. and go away Ryan Loved Paige and Reiley in this chapter with the whole ladybug thing. Brax and Charlie's chat was quite sad. Very good chapter Danni.

Sorry abit late reading this. Great ending and I have really enjoyed all the stories in this series. Will you be write another sequel ? Or are you going to start something new? Which ever it is I look forward to your next story.

WOW u update fast just had to catch up. Heath asked Indi to marry him in style didn't he? . Roxi's a nice name for their baby. More soon.

Well Brax really messed up there didn't he. I felt sorry for him. I can see why Charlie stormed out through. RYAN'S back well I want him to go away again. Oh my I think I maybe starting to come over to wanting Chax to get married in this story. Hopefully Brax will ask her to marry him soon before Ryan gets in the way.

I think this chapter was very good, as it showed Heath's caring side which he keeps hidden away most of the time. I thought it was very cute with him playing with Max and Lola on the beach. Glad he changed his mind with the marriage thing to try and see the kids, hopefully he will grow closer with Bianca too. They could become a cute little family. Wasn't epecting Brax to ask Charlie to marry him at the end.

Hey Just caught up with this story. It's got loads of great stuff going on in it.I think Indi and Heath work well as a couple too. More Soon.

Ah so Liam isn't Bella dad the mind boggles at who is I'm saying Elijah It's a shame Charlie didn't get the question she wanted but man that holiday sounds SOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOL I want to go.

Deleted Sorry this was going to be a update but realised it wasn't quite ready through.

Oh dear Charlie found Liam's ring this is not looking like it's going end well. Charlie and Jacob's chat about Angelo was sweet.

It's sad about Ash's Mum sounds like she might of died. I did think Bianca's guy might of been Liam, wasn't sure through. Bella made me laugh with always speaking Italian But what really upset me was that Captain Jack got flushed down the toilet oh dear. Naa I wasn't that upset really.