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What has happened to me I quite liked Brax and Charlie in that chapter and it was all rather sweet with them getting back together. With Casey handing himself in we will hopefully learn what really happened

Thanks JoiseTash

Great last couple of chapters I don't know why but I did find it funny when Jacob bit Brax and Brax nearly swore The Xavier and Ruby scene was sweet. YAY for my Ruby,Casey theory could be true.

That was a incredible piece of writing. Well Done something to be very proud of.

Very good I have sent you a PM Because I think I have worked out what is going on here and dont want to ruin it for everyone else

Quite a dark moving chapter there but it was very good. Poor Ruby I have to say I felt sorry for Brax for the 1st time, when Charlie dumped him. I guess he is feeling quite messed up in the head with the shock of Casey raping someone. Wonder what he will do to Casey when he see's him. more soon this story just gets better with each update.

Very Gripping chapter I just don't know who to believe hmm I am leaning towards Ruby through but the way Ruby showered in her clothes makes me wonder if it was to get rid of the evidence that she slept with Casey.

I had a shiver go down my spine when reading that quite a chilling chapter Look forward seeing how you finsh this story regarding Annie and Brax.

So Charlie and Brax are back on hopefully Brax won't get caught up with helping Heath and Casey out of trouble Hmm the ending it does sound like Ruby was raped I don't think it was Casey through could it of been Heath?

Good that Xavier got his bear at first when Charlie gave it back to him I thought he was going to settle down in bed for the night with his bear. Loved the chat between them both and Xavier gave some very good advice. Oh no at Heath getting Casey to do his drug deals for him not good. Don't see it ending well for Casey.

Xavier having a teddy bear made me smile Hope he gets it back Hmm Not sure Brax would leave the River boys for Charlie Look forward to more

It's alaways good to see Brax do some groveling He has a lot of making up to do. I'm not too sure about Ryan anymore I think he could turn out to be a bad guy too maybe Charlie should just stay away from men for a while.

Wow Charlie took Ruby and Xavier's news really well wasn't expecting her too Can I sense Ryan catching Charlie and Brax here? Good update

Oh no Reefton Lakes has it's very own clone of Colleen Ok Ryan is getting quite strange with the whole biting your kid thing. I wonder if the reason Emma moved away was to get away from him because he was abusing her maybe? Also the reason for Ryaan's wife leaving him could be she couldn't take him doing it anymore. Hmm maybe Ryan will turn abusive towards Charlie and Brax will come and save her? See after that chapter I have gone into thinking overdrive

Yay a update I have missed this story glad to have it back. Well that was a very hot and steamy chapter But with all seriousness I like these sort of chapters because it shows what a unbreakable bond Roman and Ella have and how deep their love goes for one another. It doesn't matter how hard times get for them they always show each other how much they mean to each other. Right I'm off wow that was deep for me Update soon.

You didn't like that update I thought it was really good. Well after that chapter, I have now come round to the way of thinking that Charlie will end up with Brax in the end. I think she will find it to hard to fight her feeling for him. Jacob made me smile in this chapter too

Good Chapter I didnt really like Brax just turning up to see Charlie like that. I found myself agreeing with Bianca there. But sadly I can't see Charlie staying away from Brax for long Team Ryan all the way for me at the moment.

Bring on the drama I say

If you would like to write a sequel I would be up for reading it

Is Brax back? I was enjoying this story without him in it I can sense some heartbreak for Ryan on the way Good chapter

VERY GOOD TWIST at the end there didn't see that one coming Very good fic I have really enjoyed reading it. I liked all the diffrent paths for all the characters and how they all ended up with their own happy endings all expect April of course

Awesome Chapter. I found the part with John, Xavier and Indi very funny. Looks like they are all going to get their happy endings.

Really Good updates I think its funny how everyone is begging you to bring Brax back I'm sure he will pop up again sometime.

Sorry Danni had like 4 chapters to catch up on they were great loved the speed dating that was so funny with all those strange men Ryan seems ok just waiting for his hidden dark secret Ruby's been quite annoying in the last few chapters

YES ANGELO AND NICOLE LIKE EACH OTHER Thats good don't really like this Theo chap I dont know why through just something about him Be interesting to see how Angelo and Theo get along working together