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So it was Casey I can wave goodbye to my crazy theory then Look forward to more.

Oh I was not expecting Rola, Colleen and Leah to be taken hostage in the diner quite a shocker there. I really enjoyed that chapter. You write the tension perfectly and it has me hooked.

WOOP WOOP THIS FIC IS BACK That chapter was insane Loved Charlie hitting on the Rominator and also VJ. Then it got better with a Charlie and Ruby catfight More soon.

awesome couple of chapters there Danni. This is one of my favourite fics on here.

I found the cookie saga rather funny Shame on you Brax for getting the wrong one Hope we find out the truth with Ruby and Casey soon Look forward to more.

Intriguing stuff. Oh dear Xavier arrested I kind of see why he was arrested but I dont blame him for hitting Casey. Could Xavier be involved in the rape somehow? I hope not ooh you have me wondering again, naa I stick to my theory.

A very high, tensoin, drama driven tense awesome chapter. But phew Mike was only knocked out with that gun. I feared the worse for him for a second there. Even through Mike is knocked out I don't think you would kill him. For 1 Zetti would hunt you down : and two, I think Alexiwill use him as a hostage to lure Roman out into the open As for Danni I think maybe she's a goner?

Good Chapter It seems Nicole is beginning to get on track again I can understand her feelings about wanting to keep her scar. It might help her move on Because in a way she can look at that scar when she feels low and realise he life's not that bad. Romans ill? Hope it's nothing serious.

What has happened to me I quite liked Brax and Charlie in that chapter and it was all rather sweet with them getting back together. With Casey handing himself in we will hopefully learn what really happened

Thanks JoiseTash

Great last couple of chapters I don't know why but I did find it funny when Jacob bit Brax and Brax nearly swore The Xavier and Ruby scene was sweet. YAY for my Ruby,Casey theory could be true.

That was a incredible piece of writing. Well Done something to be very proud of.

Very good I have sent you a PM Because I think I have worked out what is going on here and dont want to ruin it for everyone else

Quite a dark moving chapter there but it was very good. Poor Ruby I have to say I felt sorry for Brax for the 1st time, when Charlie dumped him. I guess he is feeling quite messed up in the head with the shock of Casey raping someone. Wonder what he will do to Casey when he see's him. more soon this story just gets better with each update.

Very Gripping chapter I just don't know who to believe hmm I am leaning towards Ruby through but the way Ruby showered in her clothes makes me wonder if it was to get rid of the evidence that she slept with Casey.

I had a shiver go down my spine when reading that quite a chilling chapter Look forward seeing how you finsh this story regarding Annie and Brax.

So Charlie and Brax are back on hopefully Brax won't get caught up with helping Heath and Casey out of trouble Hmm the ending it does sound like Ruby was raped I don't think it was Casey through could it of been Heath?

Good that Xavier got his bear at first when Charlie gave it back to him I thought he was going to settle down in bed for the night with his bear. Loved the chat between them both and Xavier gave some very good advice. Oh no at Heath getting Casey to do his drug deals for him not good. Don't see it ending well for Casey.

Xavier having a teddy bear made me smile Hope he gets it back Hmm Not sure Brax would leave the River boys for Charlie Look forward to more

It's alaways good to see Brax do some groveling He has a lot of making up to do. I'm not too sure about Ryan anymore I think he could turn out to be a bad guy too maybe Charlie should just stay away from men for a while.

Wow Charlie took Ruby and Xavier's news really well wasn't expecting her too Can I sense Ryan catching Charlie and Brax here? Good update

Oh no Reefton Lakes has it's very own clone of Colleen Ok Ryan is getting quite strange with the whole biting your kid thing. I wonder if the reason Emma moved away was to get away from him because he was abusing her maybe? Also the reason for Ryaan's wife leaving him could be she couldn't take him doing it anymore. Hmm maybe Ryan will turn abusive towards Charlie and Brax will come and save her? See after that chapter I have gone into thinking overdrive

Yay a update I have missed this story glad to have it back. Well that was a very hot and steamy chapter But with all seriousness I like these sort of chapters because it shows what a unbreakable bond Roman and Ella have and how deep their love goes for one another. It doesn't matter how hard times get for them they always show each other how much they mean to each other. Right I'm off wow that was deep for me Update soon.

You didn't like that update I thought it was really good. Well after that chapter, I have now come round to the way of thinking that Charlie will end up with Brax in the end. I think she will find it to hard to fight her feeling for him. Jacob made me smile in this chapter too

Good Chapter I didnt really like Brax just turning up to see Charlie like that. I found myself agreeing with Bianca there. But sadly I can't see Charlie staying away from Brax for long Team Ryan all the way for me at the moment.