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Oh come on of course Charlie will meet Brax for a date liked the lttle note he left her. Casey and Ruby's date was good but I'm wondering what Casey did for Heath that bit didn't sound good Look Forward to more

Good start looks like its going to be good well done Jen

I like how this story is coming together. Are you going to get Xavier and April back together? seems like that is the way you are heading. April seems to like Dex but she's unhappy because she loves Xavier deep down that's what I'm thinking. Look Forward to more

Wow Grant is one creepy guy not liking the sound of his plan. That ending was gripping

Has Nicole gone mad what the heck is she doing kissing Penn Just thought I would showed you how confused I am Still can't believe Angelo is gone. I always look forward to your updates too.

Great Chapter Hmm wonder why April feels like she not happy anymore Romeo better not run off and leave Ruby with the baby Well written

I am totally gob smacked Angelo is dead did I just read the ending right? Wasn't expecting this twist at all Sorry I never commeted eariler I have been busy with hosptail and stuff

Hope Angelo and Brax don't end up doing something silly to Grant his not worth it Hope Ruby gets away from Grant and doesn't get trapped in the house with him. Look forward to more

I thought Ruby was going to find out about Charlie's drinking too I think Brax and Heath may have soething dodgy going on and Casey will get caught up in it now going by the ending

Very well written chapter very intense stuff I don't like the sound of what will happen next another death which will break the family apart

Nice chat between Brax and Charlie there It was nice to see a insight of how he is feeling too talk about stress enjoy your holiday

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Can't Believe Angelo epxected Ruby to still be friends with him the guy's dumb Glad Charlie's keeping the baby update soon

That was a awesome chapter really well written I laughed at the bit where it said Brax was shocked to found Charlie's front door open of course it is Brax the doors are never locked in Summer Bay Glad Brax is there is support Charlie

Sorry about missing the last couple of chapters I have just read them Glad that Nicole has grown up abit I like her abit now I wonder what Brax is upto seems dodgy through. Feel sorry for Casey wanting to help Ruby but she won't let him Look Forward to more

Very well written chapter liked all the interaction between all the characters I think I know who Nicole's babysitters will be

Brax was quite funny trying to give Casey with his sex speech Look forward to more

Very Good chapter I liked the the bit with Casey and Charlie I might be the only one here but I thought Charlie and Casey might start a secret love affair or maybe not Martha's just annoys me

I like the fact that Ruby and Mattie are both having a baby. Thought Xavier's reaction to Romeo was good but didn't like Romeo losing his temper with Xavier. Look Forward to more

Good Start look forward to more

Thanks Red I'm glad you didn't see the ending coming this has been the main chapter I have been working towards form the beginning. So I knew I wanted them both to die. Glad you liked the bit with Dex I used the funny parts at the start to really shock you at the end I have two more chapters left so hopefully you like them too. Thanks Carina I'm writing this from my hideout Sorry for killing them off but like I said I had it planned this way from the start Glad I got the emotions right for you. The last two chapters will be emotional but it will be a nice fitting ending for Aden and Belle.

Aww poor Roo Poor Roman The emotions in this chapter well written well. Hopefully Roman will get back to Nicole in time Well Done

Roman you should of just shot him It's not looking good for Roo I think she may be a goner I hope Penn keeps his word and won't hurt Nicole That was a really cool update

Well that was a shocker with Casey and Annie kissing like that I was like oh no she's your sister when I read that bit and I like diffrent so it's all good

Wow that was so good I'm really liking Ruby and Charlie's relationship in this story. Feel a bit sorry for Brax through hopefully Charlie will stop pushing him away soon. I thought the bit with Heath was quite funny look forward to more