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That was a nice ending. Everyone is happy in their own ways. Thanks for writing this. Look forward to more fics from you soon.

WELCOME BACK JT That was such a fantastic and funny chapter there liked Roo's chats with Brax and Indi they were funny I like the force flied idea in Brax's restaurant too. look forward to more.

Good chapter the first part of the chapter made me laugh with how Sid and Gina found out about Xavier and Indi So Romeo and Ruby are going off the Perth for a fresh start thats a good idea look forward to more

Wow that was deep and somewhat moving chapter Liked how Belle told Javier she loved him but in a first love kind of way you never forget your first love. looking forward to seeing how this ends because it seems like that this chapter was the last one to me.

Great chapter there I'm hoping Annie is Brax's sister too. Glad that Ma Braxton wants to find out aswell. Look forward to the next update. I'm Slightly worried by your dedication aswell hopefully Aaron is found soon I hope

Great Chapter. I can see Xavier and Indi working out really well Look forward to more

Oh Brax you lucky man you have 14 more dates to look forward too I liked their date very sweet I like them as a couple in this fic more than I do on the show for some reason Wow that Preview looks great exicting stuff

Wow Really good chapter but really sad again don't want Belle to die Looking forward to where you take this next

Sorry I somehow missed this update Really funny chapter loved Ruby telling Charlie not to stay out all night and that she had work tomorrow made me laugh update again soon

oh thats a shame Zetti won't be round for a while

Yes Penn is very deranged I'm not sure if I felt sorry for him or not. But he did seem worried about Rob but then his going to get rid of Angelo somehow not liking the sound of that Does Rob have epilepsy ? anyhow I find it all very exicting stuff

I liked that chapter found a hungover Geoff very funny but the raw egg he had to drink sounded horrible I am shocked Aden can eat a cooked breakfast don't think I would be able too if it was my wedding day Thought the scene at the end with the girls sweet sounds like Belle loves Aden so hopefully nothing goes wrong at the wedding

Good update Xavier and Indi I think they make a good couple Still wondering what Romeo has planned update soon

I like the idea of this fic. I wasn't expecting Annie to be Brax's sister. I liked the flashback with a young Brax Look forward to more

very well written chapter but also very sad look forward to more

I hope Charlie's baby is ok I think Ruby was right to have a go at April in that chapter although I guess you can't help who you fall in love with. Felt sorry for Charlie wonder if she will listen to Nicole or just slap her I can't see that chat going well. so Angelo has some proof of the baby now he shouldn't of needed proof Can't wait for the next chapter

Harry Potter & The Deathly Hallows was really good going again Sunday :D cant beilve its all ended through very sad

Xavier and Indi going to the cinema as friends hmmm are they going to sit in the back row hmmm wonder what Romeo has in mind just a guess will he ask her to marry him ? look forward to more

I liked the idea of the evil and good Belle thing that Red come up with But I have this story mapped out in my mind from start to the end so I stuck with the 2nd Belle being a ghost glad I made it make sense wasn't sure I was going to be able too

Yeah I don't know why you were worrried about this chapter It was really good The emotions of the characters were written really well Loved Charlie and Bianca's chat sounds like Charlie feels like she might have to cope with the baby on her own felt sorry for her I felt sorry for Nicole too I know I must be the only one but I could see her point about being sacred about starting a family with Angelo and that he might ditch them for Charlie's baby Look Forward to more

I thought I had seen this somewhere before thought I was going mad I found it really interesting and it was written really well

Really well written chapter These characters have been through a lot and I for one hope it carrys on for a while Love this story

I feel this chapter is the clam before the storm somehow Belle working in a strip club I like the sound of that Geoff drunk was funny Look Forward to the next chapter

Yep Romeo was eaten

I didn't expect them to get away hopefully Charlie will get there in time Thats a shame about Annie