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I started this story quite liking Javier and felt sorry for him now I am hating him I think his going do anything to get Belle hope he doesn't hurt Aden Great story so far

Nice update must of been hard for Ruby hearing the news like that she wont cope with this news good I don't think I dont mind the length of your chapters what ever you want more soon

Hey Zetti I read this last night but didnt get chance to comment That chapter was sad but it was really Good Poor Rob don't think this story will have a happy ending but it might you might make things good again Cant wait for more

I liked the comupter lines at the beginning made me laugh Really funny chapter

I wasn't expecting it to be Gardy I thought it might of been Penn who kidnapped her so I was wrong Liked those 2 last chapter really action packed look forward to more

Wonder whos missing you have me hooked now

I thought that was a sweet and touching scene which will make the heartbreak wrost when it happens and I think there will be some heartbreak sadly Great chapter through

This looks very interesting cant wait to see where it goes

Hmm I dont think Amy going back to the city to meet with her parents somehow Romeo and Ruby it will all end in tears look forward to more

Zetti nice try trying to trick us all I could say I hope Rob is ok but I know he will be theres no way you would kill him off well done on a great update

I hope you get well soon Mark (JosieTash)

Another fantastic chapter there Jen I am really liking Dex in this story makes me laugh with all the animals facts I feel sorry for Indi through

That was a nice chapter it does make what Nicole and Angelo are going now sadder through but that chapter was just awwwwwwwwwwwww Look forward to more

Sorry Carina hows your birthday going ?

Nice chapter there You are a great writer you are really good at writing how the characters feel Have a good drama class

Bianca you got over Liam fast I really liked that one shot well done

Hey Red Sorry I haven't commented in years I fell behind with this story I'm up to date now I would like to say it's really Awesome You write the characters so well I really like the Romeo and Ruby love affair story There is something really dodgy going on with Amy so I'm gripped by that too

Good Chapter I for one didn't know the man was going to be Aden so you shocked me there Now come on Javier your plans not going to work Belle's going lose both of them I think Look Forword to more

2 Great chapters there They lost their baby that sucks They must feel really drained and I can understand why Angelo turned to drink but I dont think thats exsuce to hurt Nicole but these things do happen but then again I guess there was very raw feelings at the time Hopefully Nicole can learn to trust him again griven time Don't think Romans going to make it easy for them through Look forward to more I come on here before I go to bed its like you give me a bed time story every night

Sadness not liking the sound of that but yay for more updates

Your welcome for the comment I'm liking this a lot it's really good. Oh dear and Charlie's first day in the the bay was going so well untill she met Jenny wonder how everyone reacts I guess its good to have Jack and Martha but I never used to like them much in the show I thhink I am going to in this story through Well Done well written too

Yay another fic from you Good start look forward to more

Great stuff I have a idea who might have Nicole I will see if I'm right in the next part look forward to next chapter

Oh dear Roman going to catch Nicole and Angelo that is not going to end well Nicole and Angelo are going get back together I can sense it after the little monments they shared in this Chapter Cant wait for more

Hey Jen Sorry Its taken me so long to comment I really liked that last chapter Dex makes me laugh loved it how evryone thought Casey was a girl shame about Indi pushing Romeo away but I can understand why must be hard for her Glad I'm not a Drone Bee