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Glad Aden never jumped Shock ending there I have no idea who has Nicole More soon please

The next update will be tomorrow

OH NO DON'T JUMP ADEN more soon want to know what happens

I liked Colleen's and Bianca's cat fight I'm sorry but that line about Charlie is sooo true

Really Good Nicole is very forgiving of Angelo but I can uderstand why she forgave him Nice portrayal of everyones emotions look forward to more

Great Update Laura First off I wonder how much Belle has just spent in that Jewellers Belle what are you doing kissing Javier sense trouble coming Look forward to more

Great start Chickiboomxx Belle needs to stay through look forward to more

I don't think Grant will confess Well written like always look forward to see how you end this Really enjoyed reading this story

Very amusing update Wasn't expecting April to be Preggers through blondie junior Can't wait for more

Roman swoops in to save the day its Summer Bay's answer to action man shame his not in the show anymore I thought he was cool Glad everyone got a happy ending after what they all have been through That final chapter had lots of action and was touching at the same time Thanks for writing this

Very Good chapter I found it very intriging with the msytery behind Angelo's behaviour made me stop and think that something isnt right here hmmm I like Roman with Roo too good pairing look forward to more

Oh Good I look forward to them :lol:fastcnating stuff

Ruby gone to see Grant not sure this is wise liked the home videos part nice touch look forward to more only 2 more chapters

Welcome back Zetti Glad your back and hope your feeling better

Very Good update Who will Belle pick hmmmmmmmm I was on Javaier's side until he started quoting Shakespeare thats just seems very cheesy but maybe that's because I'm a guy and Shakespeare really stresses me out Aden seems like Belle's safe bet While Javaier seems like her exicting optoin but is that what she really needs I don't know where your going to go with this

That was very Good I'm in two minds about Romeo I think its good his there for Indi but I don't like Indi thinking its not Romeo fault she pregnant aswell it takes two to tango girl does that make sense I see your trying to edcate me about female sea monkeys now I'm learning alot fro this fic look forward to more

Hope you get better soon Zetti take it easy

So glad Ruby read the letter calmly I thought that was a very sad chapter but it was very good and well written look forward to more

Chapter 7 I loved how Miles repeated Rabbit's order made me laugh Chapterr 8 Rabbit and Dex are comedy gold This story cheers me up

Wow I like the twist to this story more soon please

A very well written chapter what are you trying to do make us cry Wonder what the letter sad Update soon

Well thank you for edcating in the world of turtles the only turtles I knew about was the ones who knew Ninga and eat pizza (Teenage Muntant Hero Turtles) lame joke I know

I found Dex very funny in that chapter with the whole egg 27 degrees for a boy and go bake in sun for girl is that true ? his remark about lemmings and the part about the turtles Great Chapter

Great but sad Chapter there. So it was Charlie. it sad nobody knew she was trapped feel for Angelo and Ruby Look forward to more Written well too