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I found Dex very funny in that chapter with the whole egg 27 degrees for a boy and go bake in sun for girl is that true ? his remark about lemmings and the part about the turtles Great Chapter

Great but sad Chapter there. So it was Charlie. it sad nobody knew she was trapped feel for Angelo and Ruby Look forward to more Written well too

Thanks Zetti I thought I would give them some happiness in this chapter and hold off telling you who dies in Belle's place

Great Chapter I can't belive Angelo did this I'm sure he regrets it but I have lost rescet for him in this story. I can't see Nicole forgiving him sadly mabe he can see the children with supervision for a while Look forward to more

Nice and fitting ending to this story I don't know about Heath turning every man gay (Not Me) but Heath and Dex seem to match each other

Very Good character interaction in this chapter and I look forward to more

Oh I'm sorry for pinching your idea I can read your mind :lol:which idea was it ? see Im not that good of a psychic You made me sad by rejecting me now only joking You can write Heath the stripper with Perry if you like I don't mind You promised yourself to Red Ranger people will talk only kidding again

Thanks Carina aww you laugh at your own jokes well at least you cheer yourself up

Plenty of drama in that last update I'm no betting man but I still think Charlie dies clever the way you don't reaval whos died yet you could keep us guessing for a long time if you want

Nice abit of double team there from Nate and Dean breaking Laura out of hosptail I wonder if her dad will come after her Good chapter

Thanks JoiseTash

WELL DONE WITH THIS CHAPTER I KNOW PEOPLE HAVING BEEN WAITING A LONG TIME FOR THE REVEAL Angelo that was pretty low of you he shouldnt of done that I lost abit of respect for him in that chapter but I do think theres more to this than meets the eye like why is he drunk a totally diffrent Angelo than we have seen before I wait with baited breath for the other side of the story

Great update there Sid made me laugh thinking Indi's back with Romeo no Sid Indi's moved on to much more exicting guys now Me being the GREAT DETECTVITE did I spot the clothes line in this chapter Sad about the next chapter being the last one don't like it when things end

Thanks Zetti glad you liked it I have loads of people tell me I should be a stand up comdien with my one liners and my imagination

Oh dam I should of set that as the quick fanfic Contest only joking I was thinking about trying to get the line in every chapter through what do you think ? Yes, get it into every chapter! If only I had time, I'd write a story called 'Where are your clothes, Heath?' where Heath has a secret job as a stripper, and Brax and Casey wonder where he's getting the extra money from x 100 Of course anyone else could write that story, if they felt like it... anyone reading this .... I have someone in mind... I wonder who you have in mind to write this story we could team up with if you liked I finsh the two I have going at the monment and then I might give it a go

Good start looking forward to more I can't be sure who's died because you have threw some curve balls in there I think it could be Charile through by the way Ruby reacted Very Good

I have one question Does April know that her sister is a mermaid

I think we should all have a friend like Rabbit she's just hilarious Great Chapter

Oh dam I should of set that as the quick fanfic Contest only joking I was thinking about trying to get the line in every chapter through what do you think ?

sorry I somehow missed the last two updates I must say you had me abit worried with the brain tumour thing but yay Holly is fine again Look forward to more soon

Well Done this story just keeps getting better But Summer Bay is one strange place with all these msytic creatures look forward to more

oh go on then move to to part 9 then

I love this story it's sooooooooooooooooo funny Can't wait for more

I knew Dan Ewing was in Power Ranger didn't know which one through so I googled him I will update later

Great Chapter there So their trapped in the farm house together bet this is the most exictment Indi's had for a long time I didn't spot the clothes line I am sad to say oh wait is it in your other story ? I will find it