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Wow looks like it's going getting very intersting wonder why everyone can see Rabbit

Nicole better not lose Rob or I will very annoyed good chapter

My hatred for Marilyn is building she really doesn't have any rights towards Rob and making alot of ememies too if I was Nicole I would bitch slap Marilyn really good update

cool fan fiction I'm hating Marilyn through she sounds like she's going give Nicole a hard time look forward to more

how about Nicgelo very good story really enjoyed it

Good work really liked it

I liked this Well Done Dexter my fav character

very well written nice start something tells me they won't stay this happy

good start looks like its going get very good as it goes on update soon

Thanks Red I have big things coming up for Nicole and your find out who was at the end in next part Thanks Miranda I have the whole story in my mind and I can picture all my ideas and I just try my best to bring the ideas to life as I write them hope thats coming across

Thanks Red Ranger but I'm having help with grammar and punctuation from Elissa (eilkell) so can't take all the credit for that glad you guys are enjoying it

this is really cool liked the supernatral element to it

good start got me wondering why they had to leave Summer Bay

I thought that was great was abit shocked with Miles and Nicole being a couple but in a strange way it worked hate to say because I'm not nomally a guy who gets emotional but I could feel tears in my eyes not saying i cried but was on brink that will be our Secret oh dam too late well done

you made me laugh out loud cool start

Well what can I say about ths Well done Carina really well written and you have this talent of drawing the reader into her mind and it really makes you feel like you want to help her

Thanks everyone next chapter done be up when i have had it proff read

Source Code at the movies Spider Man at home

Dont worry Miranda plenty more to come already ready know how it ends

sorry if the full stops and that arent very good I'm not very good with them

Does anyone else find Charlie very annoying with all the faces she pulls? It's always the same. She's got to be the most rubbish cop out there and she's never there for Ruby who I find annoying as well.

we can only hope

I dont know what it is but i have got off Tony I think his just gone really sumg and I didn't really rate his teaching he acted like he didn't want to be there I agree with Liam about Mathra she is messing him about and seems shocked when he tells her to stop it I just think she a tart to be honest and she doesnt care about Liam or even Hugo seems to have forgot about him I was looking forward to this Leah storyline with Eligiah but after I read a spoiler about it not botered anymore The best storyline at monment is the Miles/ Rabbit

does Jai leave I think its a shame liked him

how much longer do we have to put up with Kristy in the uk she just told Miles shes going to marry him