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Yes I think that really is funny Rabbit This chapter really made me laugh it was just great well done can't wait for more

Well done really good The abuse scenes were written perfect very intense and creepy. I'm not saying the whole thing wasn't written really good because it was but like Carina said the abuse scenes made me cringe as I read them. poor Aden hope Laura gets help I pat you on the back for the great work your doing on this fic

that was a sort of heart warming and sad chapter at the same time great work

Hey Tele This is a really interesting story I think it could be Angelo who has Roma reason 1 His a cop so he could be leading people down the wrong path reason 2 I think he knows about Charile and Roman's affair and his taken Roma as revenge on Roman for that and the best way to hurt Roman is through Nicole look forward to more

loads of funny parts I liked in that chapter “By the grace of almighty God, we will prevail,” said Elijah, making the sign of the cross. and the photo of Colleen in a bathing suit. look forward to more

YAY You posted this already I'm liking this What has Angelo done I wonder how could he hurt Nicole

Great chapter Not liking Dean Holly get rid you don't need him look forward to more

Good update Good to have Aden back I'm sure he will help everyone out now look forward to more

Hey did you have a good time at the wedding you went too today ? Brilliant Fic I have really enjoyed reading it it's really has been a emotional rollercoaster both for the characters and us as the readers and I think the reason for that is its brilliantlity written so pat on the back for you just sad it's over now can't wait to read your next story Well Done

Rabbit might be Dex and Nicole's furtre daugther really good I'm liking this story

Nice chapter I wonder how Nates going help Laura wonder how Aden's going take his family troubles when he gets back look forward to more

They live happily ever after of course or have you got a shock coming hmmm loved reading this story so thanks for writing it

I must say I felt sorry for Marilyn in that chapter but glad it's looking like happier times are happening for Nicole only two parts left :( well all good things have got to come to a end sadly

I don't quite know what to say about that last chapter I'm speechless I will say this through it was really good look forward to more xx

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COME BACK MARYILN YOU BATTY WOMAN you really do like to tease us don't you Really Good update

Pirates of the Carribean on strangers tide It was alright but not as good as others

Absolutely hilarious don't worry Leah and Ruby you have time for a little cooking contest it's not as if the world is being taken over by Robots or anything love this story makes me laugh

cool chapter Marilyn is one batty woman Roman just get some of your army buddies to track her down hope he gets with Roo well done

Great Chapter really good for someone with writer's block found it was quite a touching chapter all round Aden needs to come back to help his family out hope to see more soon

Holly their not your mates really if they but I can understand why she did it with the trouble at home with Belle and Aden another great chapter I love how gripping your stories are

Good update why thank you I am Satisfied for now but will it stay like this I don't think so Great writing will be sad when this story is over

Great chapter can I sense trouble for Roman or it might just be my mind going into overdrive hope Marilyn doesn't do anything to him oh so you like twists do you I will be ready for it

Well Angelo you are a silly boy he might have to wait forever are you in hiding again Zetti ? you might need to come out and fix this Bring on the next chapter

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Laura didn't tell Nate I really thought she was for a min there he might work it out through teasing us like that look forward to next part

I like Nate and Laura being like a mini version of Aden and Belle it's a nice touch Hopefully Nate will help Laura out if and when she tells him look forward to more