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Oh God hope his going be ok

I liked that is it the end through or are you going carry on ? I had no idea who was getting married so I just had to look at the spoiler Well Done

What a bitch Amy is using Xavier like that I think Romeo and Ruby are in love they just dont want to say it I think you might get Xavier and Indi together

this is a really strong start please carry on Charlies having Angleos baby but he cheated on her with Nicole oh trouble looms

I also fell for your trick I thought Indi had seen Romeo and Ruby too clever twist there this is one of my favs stories

really good chapter Lets hope Colleen doesn't get food poisoning from the wedding cake was starting to think Belle was going to be ill phew only pregnant so thats ok loved Adens Harley Davidson idea

Its SUPER MILES loved Miles last line there wonder whats wrong with the bus hoppe their ok glad Alf is ok too

Glad that Charlie and Ruby talked I felt sorry for Charlie in this chapter for the first time in this story but I still get Rubys point of view through Really Good cant wait for more

Glad Nicoles safe don't think its going to stay like that through hope Belle will be ok I forgot about her cancer with all this going on with Nicole

I'm on Rubys side at the monment although I can see it was a horrible way for the town to find out the truth I can see why Ruby blurted it out like that sometimes people just let their anger take over without thinking great update

Nice update hopefully Charlie will be happy when she sees Joey I'm sure she will look forward to more

quite a moving chapter there hopefully their find Rob soon look forward to more soon

hope the catch Elliot soon hope Irene locks her door and Nicole is safe there but then again noboday locks their doors in Summer Bay Really enjoying this story sorry I didn't comment on other chapter missed it somehow

Good Chapter Although I feel sorry for Charlie with the reaval being so public I sort of get where Ruby is coming from too she must have loads of questions going round her head she just let her anger get the best of her hope Charlie and Ruby can sort things out very good keep it up

Oh my head hurts Rob's not dead but the doctors were there when he died I'm confused Can't wait to see where this is going

Hope Alf is ok I just have to trust the rabbit on that one Liked Luca's commet about if you drop a baby your be shocked how well they bounce Liked Rabbits line about Romeo finding new boyfriend too look forward to more

Wasn't expecting Joey there so good twist I think she should come back to the show too Sarah Well Done look forward to more

Sorry Zetti that I never commented on the last 2 chapters untill now I have loved reading this fic its been so good the twists have been really shocking Its sad that you killed Rob off but I was sadly expecting it Did you bring Aden back for Carina by any chance I'm not too sad that this has ended because I see that you have posted the follow up story so YAY Well Done

That was such a sad chapter really powerful didn't expect Marilyn to die one a more cheerful note can Romeo be attacked by vultures sorry he just seems like a bit of a drip to me look forward to next chapter

Yep something dangerous is happening here Glad Nicole ok through Nice update

I have come to terms that you might kill Rob sure looks that way love how people are begging you not to kill him

Great update Nice to see a diffrent side to Brax cant wait to see where this goes

BOOO to presky real life

I started this story quite liking Javier and felt sorry for him now I am hating him I think his going do anything to get Belle hope he doesn't hurt Aden Great story so far

Nice update must of been hard for Ruby hearing the news like that she wont cope with this news good I don't think I dont mind the length of your chapters what ever you want more soon