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Hope Angelo is allowed to look after Tyler He is his son after all. Hope Roman,Nicole and Roo are ok but I'm not so sure all of them will be Great chapter as normal

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So Penn is dead or you could be tricking us hmmm not too sure on this one I'm worried about Roo through banging her head like that hopefully she's ok update soon

It's a shame that Charlie doesn't want the baby hope she changes her mind she's a bit messed up at the min I think hopefully Brax will help her look forward to more

Hmm interesting I can't wait to read everyone's reaction to this. I'm glad Annie is his sister More soon

I will be updating this as soon as I can

It was Interesting to learn how Penn survived I think he should of in the show. bit worried for Nicole, Roo and Roman here

That was really good Nicole can you please shut up now I think she's driving Angelo mad now It won't be long before Casey finds out about their past I don't think update soon

That was written so fantastically But was quite sad Hope Annie's their sister.

Liking the Mother/Daughter bond that Charlie and Ruby are beginning to have now its nice they live together now update soon

Good Chapter Don@t like how Nicole and Roo are going to meet with Penn with no back up sounds risky. I thought Aden would of been the better person to go with Roo as well. because Penn doesn't know him and his obbessed with Nicole. But it all add to the drama so I am up for that

NO WAY I don't believe that for a second but it would shock me if died.

oooh Carina looks like maybe on the cards Zetti are you willing to give me a clue

Marley and Me with my Mum and she cried she said it was hay fever hmmm but I heard sobbing

Hey sorry about the late comment Poor Ruby finding out Mark and Jenny are gone. Charile why did you break up with Brax something tells me You will need him. Look Forward to next chapter.

Hmm So Nicole and Angelo have met Tyler now be careful its all part of Penn's evil plan Good chapter Wow a a permanent death is soon to come that sounds exciting it surely won't be will it ? Thats my guess or it could be update soon.

Wow yippe how exciting is this story let me answer that for myself VERY fantanstic stuff. I think Angelo should watch his back Penns out to get him. Look Forwaed to more

Hope Roo and Roman can sort things out everyone needs some happiness Hope Charlie gets some leads soon Good update

Wow wasn't expecting that twist I was liking Ma Braxton too Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you get news about your friend soon.

Aww Nice ending I had a chill go down my back with Aden's laast line about seeing Belle again sometime it was sad she had to die but glad she died happy with her friends round her. Good fic I will keep my eye out for more stories from you.

WOW my hatred for Nicole is growing how the hell does she expect Charlie to forgive her. I was sort of on Angelo's side when he was having the baby talk with Charlie up to the point when he said he was still moving away. I don't beilve he will be there for the baby when his in the City so hoping he doesn't go with Nicole. Hope Ruby's ok I know it seemed like I was moaning about the characters alot but I really enjoyed the chapter

I wasn't expecting Angelo and Nicole in the other car that was was a good twist. I like peoples thoughts on how Angelo might be Ruby's Dad I just thought they went out in the past meaning Angelo and Charlie. Look forward to more

WELL DONE LAURA That was a soppy but prefect ending there The letter from Javier was rather sad but at the same time it was happy Glad that he is moving on and that he wants Belle to be happy. I have really enjoyed this fc which is a shock because I don't normally read romances but I liked this one I am just going put it down to you being a great writer I will keep a eye out for new stuff from you Well Done again

I'm going to miss Belle too but I think Belle and Aden will come back somehow That update was great but also very emotional but I didn't cry Update soon

Poor Nicole I loved the line (How much bad luck do I have to endure before I get my happy ending?) I'm sure she has quite a bit to endure before things get better thats what makes this story so good Well Done Zetti