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I think I know what is going on with Nicole now. Not too sure about Angelo yet but I think he has go a probelm too Look forward to more

Oh I hope Angelo doesn't get hurt or anything trying to prove Brax is dodgy I am kind of on his side here. Hope Brax doesn't do anything to prove him right

Wow I have just caught up with this fic the last two chapters have been very good.

i prefer chicken curry too Loz Anyway this story looks very interesting. I am very intrigued about Nicole's past. Angelo seems a bit lost too hopefully these two will help each other out when they meet.

That was a great chapter It's interseting to see how they are all deaiing with their grief diffrently. You write it it really realistically.

Loved the interaction with all the characters in the last chapter Update soon

Thanks Sarah

That was written really well Hope Charlie is ok. Glad Grant is dead but I liked the drama he brought to the story The next chapter looks good

Very funny chapter Musicians are known to rip people's arms out of their sockets I liked the part with Havey trying to steal the sight sighting BiancaD7 That chapter was so good.

Sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter I thought the Penn and Jack showdown was really good and powerful This last chapter was a good ending to the this story a very powerful bittersweet ending I would read a sequel if you were going to write one I would say this short series of Angelo and Nic stories you have written have been one of my fav set of fictions. I always looked forward to your next update.

A very hard hitting chapter. Liked how everyone had diffrent reactions to the news. I felt sorry for them all. But Xavier's reaction made the biggest impact for me. I really want to see where you take this next Have a good holiday where are you off too?

A nice little conversation between Ruby and Brax. Update soon

I might be the only one here but I found myself agreeing with Angelo in this chapter with looking out for his baby The gang stuff sounds good.

I'm thinking Well exicting chapter I love the high drama in this story

My head hurts I'm confused but look forward to more very intriguing

Great update Jen. I wonder what Casey has done and how he got out of his reform school Will Casey and Dex run off together now and leave their probelms in the bay behind them Look Forward to more

Welcome back hope you had a great time Casey and Dex good idea they would make a good couple I think.

Ruby was really funny in that chapter Wonder what Brax and Brodie were talking about at the end. Really Good

Right I'm too sure here is April dead? A very brave move I did find Romeo's and Nicole chat very funny through Jezz that guy just doesn't have a clue More soon please

Good update I kind of feel sorry for Nicole on on the other hand I don't felt sorry for her when she said she was lonely but I was also cheering Ruby on. Not sure what I think of Brax I think Charlie should stay away from him and sort herself out with all the baby stuff first with Brax being dodgy he I think he could add to her stress. but maybe I'm the only one who thinks that way

I have just fell off my chair in shock Naa not really. Yay Angelo's back but Jack wasn't expecting him to pop up wonder how he will fit into this story. ERRRR Nicole why oh why did you sleep with Penn answers on a postcard I can't work her out I'm a bit worried for Aden could you have tricked us all making us think that Angelo was your 2nd death? You did say you had 2 deaths planned is that right? Look forward to more

Aww its sad that Charlie thinks Angelo will be there for the baby while he feels he cant be anymore. Not sure if its a good thing with Nicole turning up to talk to Charlie at the end. Hope they just have a serious chat and dont end up fighting. Great update

WOW that is all I have to say Naaa did I fool you that was one high full driven fast paced whopper of a chapter Hopefully Grant's gun jammed or something surely you wouldn't kill charlie would you? The next chapter looks good I am really looking forward to what you could mean by this part As the police close in, Grant takes matters into his own hands

These two seriously have some Sexaul tenison going on. I like them as a couple look forward to the next part

It looks like Ric and Mattie are the only happy couple here Romeo doesn't really live up to his name when romancing girls does he? He could of asked Ruby better than that. April and Dex they need to have a talk Look forward to more.