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Jacob made me smile in this chapter the scene with Bianca reading his book was really good. Has Brax and Heath really been gone for 17 months didn't realise that. Update soon

Great Chapter So Ruby's baby's on it's way a bit worried that it isnt due for another two weeks through Hope its going to be ok.

That was a sweet chapter with everyone cooing over Jacob Ruby seems very loved up with Xavier. wonder if Casey's going to try and cause trouble for them Look forward to more.

Ruby on her phone all the time was funny. “Well I’d appreciate it if you could put your phone down for all of 5 minutes and have a conversation with me” Charlie said “You were the one who wanted this trip away after all”“Yeah but that was when I was all single and depressed like you” Ruby said That was a good bit Be interesting to see how Charli's visit goes with Brax.

I thought the send off for Nicole was nice Glad Xavier and Indi are back on again. Made me laugh when Gina aksed Indi where her clothes were also Gina's theat to Xavier at the end was funny Look forward to more

Great couple of chapters there Danni

Oh my everyone is left heartbroken The Charlie and Brax scene was really good. I hope Brax hands himself into the cops to win Charlie back anything esle wouldn't prove his love for her. Well done on this Fantastic story

Ruby being in bed when Jane came round made me laugh I liked how you brought Rubys diabetes into the story they hardly mention it on the show Hmmm Hope Charlie stays away from Brax he could ruin stuff for her. Great chapter

That was a nice chapter Hopefully Jocab will be back with Charlie soon.

Great chapter The beginning made me smile with Charlie pacing and asking Morag the time all the time The ending was sad through with Nicole. look forward to more.

Great chapter The chat with Charlie and Ruby was sweet I want Xavier and Ruby to be together. Look Forward to more

Oh No Angelo's died thats a shame glad he saw Charlie before it happened. At least Charlie might get Jacob back now. I hope Charlie doesn't take Brax back I think he needs bringing down a peg or two. Wonder how Nicole will react about Angelo.

Sorry I havent commented for ages I was in hospital. What fantastic updates to catch up on lots for plot twist its just all been really exciting stuff to read Jacob being taken away was everyone fault in a way all expect for Charlie I would say, but I think it is mostly Brax to blame. I fear it might be Angelo shot at the end of the last chapter here. Hope not althrough he might of gone about some things wrong his only had Charlie and Jacob's Interests at heart. I quite like him in this story. I also like the way Charlie sticks up to Brax in this story.

OH NO HEATH DIED I think I said before I thought this might happen but still a shocker.

I have always found her annoying

Hey Red Sorry about missing too chapters I have been ill I enjoyed catching up through It was good to see the old characters back for the wedding Dexter and Casey living together is nice. shame Casey doesn't live with Brax and Heath in this story because it would be rather interesting to see Dex living with them hmm not sure about Aden asking Nicole to marry him feels like they need more time to be together as a couple first Look forward to more Each chapter leaves me wanting to read more

That was a Brilliant ending Liked how you summed everything up and they all got their happy endings. Will you be writing a sequel with Brax and Charlie married?

Poor Nicole I think its someone very close to her who did this with the Princess clue very well written

Sorry about not commenting sooner I have been ill but enough of that This fic has been awesome to read and write for I have really enjoyed it. The final to chapters had me laughing just what I needed. Thank you for asking me to come abroad wirting this

Good Update I can kinda see Ruby's point about wanting Brax there for them and being a family. after what happened with Angelo she just wants a father figure I guess but Brax still has to pay for his crimes. update soon

Glad Charlie's ok Hope she let's people help her with the rape thing through hopefully Bianca will help her through it As always very well written sad that it is ending but look forward to see how you finish this story off

I get the feeling something bad is going to happen to Brax before he can hand himself in Good update

Good update Aden and Justin got Ric charged with assault have I got that right? No wonder they aren't getting along now. Hoping Indi and Xavier get back together.

Great update Shame Ruby's going to cover for Brax through Oh the baby's on the way didnt see that happening just yet This bit made me laugh He doesn’t want you getting in trouble” Ruby answered “Said you had this crop and that Heath had been doing deals with Spanner or something like that and that -” Hammer is indeed a spanner

Found that funny with Angelo and Brax role playing there I can see trouble on It's way for everyone. update soon