Inactive User Posted August 20, 2018 Report Share Posted August 20, 2018 Great chapter Liked how the whole town were supportive of Denny and Ricky Oh dear so now Brax is back in town. Wondering how he will react to both Denny and Ricky as a couple Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted August 21, 2018 Report Share Posted August 21, 2018 Brax is back is he? If you had added abit of mystery there I would have guessed at it being Olivia come back with revenge in mind she would be very put out that she's not desgining Tamara's wedding dress haha. Brax is going to be utterly gobsmacked and I'm looking forward to that 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 9, 2018 Report Share Posted September 9, 2018 Great chapter liked the interaction between Ricky and Brax Right on point Denny walking in wonder how Brax will react Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helena Posted September 9, 2018 Report Share Posted September 9, 2018 I can't believe that brax has found out about Ricky and Denny I'm pretty sure that brax will be extremely angry can't wait to read more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 9, 2018 Report Share Posted September 9, 2018 Ah it could have been worse Brax could have climbed through the bedroom window to find Ricky and Denny sleeping together or gotten in bed with Denny when Ricky was going to the toilet one night haha So really he found out about them in the kindest sort of way lol I wondered at the time would Ricky really be happy with Brax when he come to fetch her in the show Or would he just be back in trouble now 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 9, 2018 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2018 Brax took a bit of time to grasp the situation, but Denny coming home at an awkward moment pretty much sorted it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 9, 2018 Report Share Posted September 9, 2018 Great chapter Whoa that was so awkward at the end. Can't wait to see how Brax will react to it. Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.B Posted September 16, 2018 Report Share Posted September 16, 2018 On 9 September 2018 at 22:37, Red Ranger 1 said: Brax took a bit of time to grasp the situation,, On 9 September 2018 at 13:11, Kristen said: Great chapter liked the interaction between Ricky and Brax Thanks Red and Kristen. I felt the things Ricky said to Brax were very important because, to be honest, Brax has always had that feeling that his actions were justified just because it was for his family, so I felt like it was time for him to hear some truths (as what I think should have happened in the show). So I'm glad you enjoyed it. On 9 September 2018 at 13:13, Mcgarry.helena@yahoo.com said: I can't believe that brax has found out about Ricky and Denny I'm pretty sure that brax will be extremely angry can't wait to read more On 9 September 2018 at 22:37, Red Ranger 1 said: but Denny coming home at an awkward moment pretty much sorted it! On 9 September 2018 at 22:51, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Whoa that was so awkward at the end. Can't wait to see how Brax will react to it. Update soon please xx Yeah I couldn't help leaving it at a awkward cliffhanger like that! I don't think Brax's going to just accept though. On 9 September 2018 at 19:08, pembie said: Ah it could have been worse Brax could have climbed through the bedroom window to find Ricky and Denny sleeping together or gotten in bed with Denny when Ricky was going to the toilet one night haha So really he found out about them in the kindest sort of way lol Now you're having me wish I had done it like that! That would have been great! Well maybe I'll do a rewrite in the future and I'll have that scene in it. Thanks guys, I'll update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 16, 2018 Report Share Posted September 16, 2018 43 minutes ago, D.B said: Now you're having me wish I had done it like that! That would have been great! Well maybe I'll do a rewrite in the future and I'll have that scene in it. Thanks guys, I'll update soon. Depends on whether you want the comedy version of this story haha I think you are aiming for a serious vibe though lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 17, 2018 Report Share Posted October 17, 2018 Will you be finishing this story DB? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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