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Interesting start, I like the insight into Ricky's fragile and lonely mental state. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

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Great chapter liked how you showed Ricky's insight to it.

Update again soon  :)

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Great chapter! 

Poor Ricky so sad that Brax ignored everyone and went after Jake! Now he’s on the run and his family have to live without him. At least they have eachother. 

Can’t wait to read more please update soon. 

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5 hours ago, Suzza101 said:

Great chapter! 

Poor Ricky so sad that Brax ignored everyone and went after Jake! Now he’s on the run and his family have to live without him. At least they have eachother. 

Can’t wait to read more please update soon. 

Yeah,it is very sad. null. I actually love Brax and Ricky together( better than Brax and Charlie anyway!), but I feel that what happened in this story is pretty much what Brax would do, especially if it involved Casey and Pirovic. I mean, he was almost about to kill Pirovic until Ricky told him she was pregnant  Thanks for responding!

21 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Interesting start, I like the insight into Ricky's fragile and lonely mental state. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Thanks Red! One of the things I really liked about 2015 was the way they showed Ricky trying to deal with being a single mother without Brax. I was a bit nervous writing this because I was afraid that I may have described it too badly but from the comments, I can see that I'm on the right track. I'll try to update as soon as I can

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Kyle and Tamara are together? I approve! Nice chat between Ricky and Denny.

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1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Kyle and Tamara are together? I approve! Nice chat between Ricky and Denny.

You and me both!😄 I completely love Kyle and Tamara together, and wish they were explored further rather than Kyle just running back to Phoebe (Pfft!) I'm happy you enjoyed the Ricky/Denny chat, I want to expand on their friendship soon... But you'll just have to find out!  LOL! 😄

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Good chapter 

nice chat between Denny and Ricky

Kyle and Tamara are together? I like it.

Update again soon :)

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