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5 hours ago, pembie said:

Do you plan to bring Brax back serves him right to return to find his old girlfriend is now a lesbian haha He really was a twit lol

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Do it in true soap form and have Brax return to find Denny and Ricky going at it like rabbits at Tamara and Kyle's wedding haha

 

Oh my god, Pembie, you never fail to make me laugh! ? 

I'm not actually sure about bringing Brax back in this fanfiction, I have never really thought about it, but it would make for extra drama, especially in the way you describe it! I will think about it. Thanks for commenting.

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5 hours ago, pembie said:

Really that's remarkable I have only left you two comments so far haha

I was also referring to your own fanfictions, I've read a lot of them and they're just amazing and hilarious.

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Yay Ricky and Denny are now together imagine if brax turned up and Kyle and Tamara are married I have just realised that from the beginning of this story I thought it was Kyle and phoebe I guess I must have been really tired

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On 24 May 2018 at 22:49, Red Ranger 1 said:

Good chapter. Liked all the couples coming together and an important step forward for Ricky and Denny. So...will it be plain sailing now? I suspect not...

Yeah, the two of them still have a lot of things to deal with. Like Kyle, I mean how would he react if (and when) he finds out that his brothers' exes are for each other? Not well, I think. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Also glad you liked all the couples as well, I felt like adding all these characters in this, even if it is in a small way. 

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Well its not quite perfect Denny might feel different when she's hungover Sorry to burst the bubble haha

Oh and Brody and Josh in a short space of a chapter I felt more chemistry there than I have ever about Brody and Ziggy haha

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