Ludub Posted November 1, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2017 I echo Red's thoughts on this one. Bonkers, utterly bonkers! I'm beginning to wonder whether I've fallen into Brody's imagination myself! Heath and Kyle as garden gnomes (of the 'River') has to be one of the most random things ever, but I enjoyed their squabbling. Love the 'Buddy-verse' view in this story, with everything being solved by a tummy rub (haha!) but it took me a while to realise that Justin and Scarlett have been shrunk and Buddy is still his normal size (Very 'Honey I Shrunk The Kids', lol!) Does Ash look like Orlando Bloom?! Or is that just how Tori sees him? I think you've got her fawning behaviour down to a tee in this! And finally, Kat and Mason (the vainest characters on the show) end up in a hellish hall of mirrors, presumably where they're going to get their comeuppance? Nuts... Just completely nuts! Sometimes I worry for your sanity! hahaha! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 1, 2017 Report Share Posted November 1, 2017 Great chapter Scarlett and Justin getting stuck in a maze. Kyle and Heath as gnomes brilliant Ash getting eaten by Buddy Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 1, 2017 Report Share Posted November 1, 2017 49 minutes ago, Ludub said: Love the 'Buddy-verse' view in this story, with everything being solved by a tummy rub (haha!) but it took me a while to realise that Justin and Scarlett have been shrunk and Buddy is still his normal size (Very 'Honey I Shrunk The Kids', lol!) Does Ash look like Orlando Bloom?! Or is that just how Tori sees him? I think you've got her fawning behaviour down to a tee in this! Nuts... Just completely nuts! Sometimes I worry for your sanity! hahaha! Nope Justin and Scarlett are normal size Heath and Kyle was small Oh I was thinking of Orlando Bloom in Lord Of Rings with his long blonde hair I'm not insane ny Mother had me tested 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 2, 2017 Report Share Posted November 2, 2017 Great chapter Loved how Justin and Scarlett were stuck in a maze, lol Can image Heath and Kyle as gnomes, hehe Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2017 Report Share Posted November 5, 2017 Oh...kay. So that's what happened to Brody's childhood tormentors then? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted November 5, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2017 I don't know why, but the name Timothy for a lion just make me laugh... Is there some significance there that I don't know of (I'm a bit behind with the show) It certainly sounds like Robbo got the better deal out of the three of them. Living with lions in the jungle doesn't sound too bad, when the alternative is being snatched from your bathroom and taken to some sort of underworld, or having an icicle rammed through your head These are very unusual case files! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 5, 2017 Report Share Posted November 5, 2017 Timothy the lion featured in one of own very silly stories that I tried to write for children once 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 6, 2017 Report Share Posted November 6, 2017 Great chapter Liked the mention of Timothy the Lion Surprised at what happened to Brody's childhood tormentors, lol Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 6, 2017 Report Share Posted November 6, 2017 Great chapter Shocked at what happened to Brody's tormentors. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted November 6, 2017 Report Share Posted November 6, 2017 Cooool latest 2 chapters .... Heath [or any river boy] as a ghome, and the "tragic" fate of those who wronged Brody was, uin a good way, insane. Nice touch with the Robbo Robert Robertson !!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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