Red Ranger 1 Posted November 9, 2017 Report Share Posted November 9, 2017 Ash and Kat being eaten? Um, is that wish fulfilment? And hopefully Mason hasn't really killed Beth.Well, not permanently anyway. And Buddy saves the day! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 9, 2017 Report Share Posted November 9, 2017 Kat's fate was always doomed with me in charge As was Buddy saving the day and Coco played her part animals are better than people haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 9, 2017 Report Share Posted November 9, 2017 Great chapter Whoa at Kat ending up as shark bait for the shark Liked how Buddy saved the day Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted November 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2017 3 hours ago, pembie said: Kat's fate was always doomed with me in charge Hahaha! Can't say I'm in any way sorry. I did find Tori fantasising about brushing Ash's golden locks like a My Little Pony very funny. Especially since he'd just been eaten right in front of her eyes. And Mason completely losing control and just shooting at anything and everything is actually scarily in character! (Also, is it bad that I'm kinda pleased he killed Beth?) And finally Brody really is a wimp in this, isn't he??! I've said it before, and Ill say it again, THIS. IS. BONKERS! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 10, 2017 Report Share Posted November 10, 2017 Brody's ok he has his monsters to see him right 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 10, 2017 Report Share Posted November 10, 2017 Great chapter Kat as shark bait can't say I feel sorry for her. Liked that Buddy saves the day Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted November 12, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2017 Oh my goodness! Mason really does have it bad for Beth, doesn't he?! Allowing her to flutter into his room every night and drain him of blood?! ( Or suck him dry. I saw what you did there ) Nice twist on the 'bird on the window sill' scenes by the way. Raffy was right in pretty much every way in that little scene she had with him. Mason is weird  and not just because he's happy to have sex with a vampire, or has Little Mix posters on his wall. but because he brags to his little sister about getting blowjobs. She's right, that is gross! At least the other Morgans have stumbled upon career paths that suit them better. Tori's a pretty crap doctor who misses all the signs that Mason is probably dying (possibly because she's more interested in exploding guts?) and Brody's had enough of being a clown and has decided to make dinner for everyone instead. All's well that ends well eh?!  Now... if only Raffy could get that spider web out of her hair. Thanks for sharing Pembie. Weird. So very weird.  haha! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 12, 2017 Report Share Posted November 12, 2017 Weird. So very weird What can I say to that other than thank you I must be abit strange myself to come up with this stuff..You never do know what your going to get with me I guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 13, 2017 Report Share Posted November 13, 2017 Great ending to this fanfiction Thank you for sharing it with us, Pembie. I did enjoy reading every chapter of this story. So thanks again! Â 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 13, 2017 Report Share Posted November 13, 2017 Great ending Beth as a bat wow Mason is very weird almost as weird as Mason seeing his dead girlfriend on the show. I look forward to your next fanfiction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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