Ludub Posted September 19, 2017 Report Share Posted September 19, 2017 Oh, I can sympathise with a fear of custard. Horrible stuff! Bleurrgh! And clowns... so I'm a bit wary of this story It's an interesting part-time job for (what I'm hoping is) a thirteen year old Brody? Love all his peculiarities! Particularly the preemptive wearing of a hat to protect him from bird poo! Lol! He kinda reminds me of Jon Richardson Love this! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 19, 2017 Report Share Posted September 19, 2017 16 minutes ago, Ludub said: Oh, I can sympathise with a fear of custard. Horrible stuff! Bleurrgh! And clowns... so I'm a bit wary of this story It's an interesting part-time job for (what I'm hoping is) a thirteen year old Brody? Love all his peculiarities! Particularly the preemptive wearing of a hat to protect him from bird poo! Lol! He kinda reminds me of Jon Richardson Love this! Yeah this story will be starved of fear so it won't be that scary. Deary me I'm even punning at my own stories now 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 19, 2017 Report Share Posted September 19, 2017 back at it Pembie but not that I'm complaining liked how you made Brody and Phoebe as teenagers and how it would of or could of been like hmm a fear of custard that's a weird one. I get clowns can be scary though. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 19, 2017 Report Share Posted September 19, 2017 Welcome back, Pembie! Loved the start to this fanfiction Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 love this and love young Phoebe and Brody they need to get together 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 10 minutes ago, sallyandflynnfan said: love this and love young Phoebe and Brody they need to get together I think you might be disappointed 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Just now, pembie said: I think you might be disappointed oh no 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted September 21, 2017 Report Share Posted September 21, 2017 I'm alos not partial to custard, so I share Brody's pain !!! Good to see that Phoebe isn't a [listed] main character !!! Looking fwd to the no doubt insane madness that will ensue in this fic !!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kellicopter Posted September 21, 2017 Report Share Posted September 21, 2017 Yay! You have no idea how excited this makes me. It's made my weekend and it's not even Friday yet! Absolutely love that we're getting an insight into the teenage years. And such a fun job for Brody to have. And moody Phoebe (had she walked off calling him a poo poo head she'd be just like the girls I look after!) 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted September 24, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2017 Hahahaha! Love this. Poor Brody seems incredibly confused by those pesky girls. I suppose if the Pheebster is all he has to go on then it's understandable... Love Ziggy being an annoying little fairy buzzing around him, but for a minute I thought she was the one threatening him and calling him 'Morgan'! lol! Robbo as a bully, with his sidekicks Lena and Zannis is a nice use of more recent characters, and I especially loved your little jibe at Zannis supposedly being in hiding while walking about the place as large as life! So has Brody disappeared for the next 27 years then?! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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