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:wub: Each update is SO good - Thanks again!

I like how you show the interaction so well even when there was no actual Chax scenes...we still know that they are having ssues. Really brilliantly written!

Charlie is playing with fire and Ryan is being pushy and wanting to cause problems...he needs to take a running jump! Please :wink:

Brax will be angry and gutted that she is keeping that from him as if there's nothing to hide...she would have told him already... Please be honest Charlie and don't go near Ryan... More Charlie and Brax chat please - its very good! Even when they are moody at eachother :rolleyes:

All the kid bits in last couple of updates are fab! Very real and love little Jacob :wub:

Really excited to see how develops... Thinking Brax's marriage thing is fear that every thing will fall apart if married but he needs to make Charlie fully aware of that and not that its her. Its too early...I'm rambling sorry! Excited for more! Thanks

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REALLY loved that Ruby baby thoughts bit !!!!!! That was ACE !!!!!!!, especially …..

 “Me first, me first.” Riley jumped up and down excitedly as she tugged on Ruby’s arm.

“Me me.” Paige shouted as she pulled on her other arm.

“Girls, c’mon, let Ruby get inside.” Charlie pulled the girls back to let Ruby and Xavier into the house.

“Hey.” Ruby smiled as she gave her mother a hug.

“How was Bali?” Charlie questioned as they took a seat on the couch, with Riley claiming Ruby’s knee. Paige sighed lightly as she climbed up onto her mother’s knee.

“It was great.” Ruby grinned. “We went to see these waterfalls, Mum they were beautiful. We went to the waterpark, we went to Turtle Island, we went parasailing....oh it was so great.”

“And that’s when we left the room.” Xavier grinned.

“Xav.” Ruby smacked his leg. “This is my mum we are talking too.”

“Ah c’mon, I know you talk about that stuff.” Xavier said.

“Well my sisters are here and they’ve just turned 3.”

 “No.” Paige shook her head. “They want me to eat Dora.” Paige sighed. “I no eat her.”

“Aww it wasn’t really Dora.” Ruby said. “It would just be her face on the cake.”

“No. It the real her.”

 “Oh...oh....oh.” Paige giggled. “We got bikes.”

“Mines is red.” Riley said. “It cool.”

“Yeah.” Charlie smiled. “They’ve got little baskets on the front and little seats on the back for your baby dolls don’t they?”

“Yeah.” Paige nodded. “Mines is pink. The best colour.”

 “Well, we’ve been talking about that, and Ruby wants to start trying for a baby soon, so she said that after this album tour, she wants to take a break for the band.”

“Wow a baby.” Charlie said. “That’s big.”

“Tell me about it.” Xavier said. “But, I’m also excited to see if it happens.”

“And has Ruby discussed this with the rest of the band?”

“Well to be honest, I was hoping it was just going to be me and her doing the whole baby thing together.”

 “So a catch up with an old friend wouldn’t hurt would it?”

“Didn’t we do that in the bar last week?” Charlie asked and Ryan nodded lightly.

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I llaughed a lot at the Paige and Riley scene telling Xavier and Ruby about eating Dory and the bike abit. :lol: Sweet that Xav and Ruby are trying for a baby. Charlie should throw that business card away or it might come back and bite her.

Always enjoy your updates.

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Great couple of updates as usual

the girls are just too cute for words :wub:

I'm getting really worried about Ryan being on the scene really do not trust him to not mess with my chax :lol:

Charlie should stay away from him please for the sake of my sanity dont think I could take any more sad Chax, really dont think it will go down well with Brax if he finds out

more soon please :)

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