Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[JosieTash]

Jacob is just sooooooooo ACE, and I LOVED Charlie in that chapter !!!!!!

REALLY enjoyed that, especially …..

 “Because I wanted a drink and in case you haven’t noticed we don’t have alcohol in this house anymore thanks to you.” Charlie spat and Brax sighed lightly before he shook his head.

 “So, you just sat at the bar yourself?” Brax questioned.

“Yes.” Charlie nodded. “I did.” She knew telling him about Ryan would only cause more trouble, and it’s not as if anything happened, they just talked that’s all.

 “I scared.” Paige whimpered.

“Scared of what?” Charlie asked as she moved her soft brown locks from her face.

“It so dark.” Paige said. “And that wind is loud.”

“You don’t need to be scared of the wind.” Charlie said softly.

“Uh-huh.” Paige nodded. “It so loud.”

“You know it can’t hurt you.” Charlie said.

“Hey Paige, how about we get some warm chocolate milk then daddy will take you back to bed?”

“No.” Paige cuddled into Charlie. “I stay with mummy.”

“You want to stay in mummy’s bed tonight?” Charlie questioned and Paige nodded. “Okay, well just for tonight.” Charlie said as she walked over to the bed and put Paige down. Paige crawled to the top and slid herself under the covers before looking back at Charlie.

“You come now?” Paige asked as she patted Charlie’s pillow.

“Yeah, I’m coming too.” Charlie smiled as she opened the drawer and pulled out some pyjamas and made her way out to the bathroom, with Brax following her.

 “Oh right enough.” Charlie exhaled. “Since I am spending your money, I’ll give you an account of everything I do from now on shall I?”

“Charlie, you’re just being stupid now.” Brax sighed and Charlie shrugged her shoulders as she grabbed her tooth brush and put some toothpaste onto it before she began to clean her teeth. “So I guess you don’t want to continue the conversation on marriage either?” Brax questioned after a few moments silence.

“What’s left to say?” Charlie asked as she spat into the sink before putting her toothbrush back into the holder. “I can’t exactly gag you and force you down the aisle so I guess you get your way there.” Charlie sighed. “Congratulations. We’re never getting married.”

 “Well I drawed a picture in class today for my tummy daddy.” Jacob said shyly. “And I wanted to give him it.”

“Oh.” Charlie nodded lightly as she bit her lip. “Sure, how about later on we go up to graveyard and I’ll show you his grave and you can leave the picture there.”

 “Hi tummy daddy.” Jacob smiled. “I’m Jacob. Mummy said you went up to heaven when I was a baby so I no remember you but I have the best daddy now at home so you don’t have to worry. He showed me to ride my bike and to surf. I love to surf, it’s the best and me and daddy have lots of fun when we go to surf. I think mummy is scared when I go but I’ll be fine. Is this okay mummy?” Jacob asked he looked up to her.

 “Oh.” Jacob said sadly. “I have none grandparents.”

“No.” Charlie shook her head. Even though Brax had started to reconcile with his mother after Casey’s death, they soon drifted again, Cheryl saying a little drink wouldn’t hurt and Brax wanting to remain sober being the main cause, she was a bad influence and Brax didn’t need that. “But you have me, and daddy and Rubes, Paige and Riley, Xavier, Auntie Bee-Bee, Liam, Leah, Miles, Irene, Colleen....you have lots of people who love you.”

“Yeah.” Jacob smiled. “I guess I do. Can we go get some ice-cream?”

[Sazzle]

Really beautiful writing! Love Charlie and Brax talking but hoping for more. Brax was actually trying and she was obviously glad for Paige to come in their bed to stop themtalking further. They both have fears and I'm hoping they both talk. Charlie needs to tell Brax about Ryan...that could cause issues for them if they start having secrets and I hope Charlie doesn't see him again.

Jacob and the talk with his tummy Daddy was brilliant. Loved it!

Thanks so much for fab writing and always making it interesting and thoughtful and always eager for more!

[RoRo90]

Great chapter

glad that Jacob doesn't seem too off with Brax any more but then again we have to wait till we see them interact again

really dont think Charlie not telling Brax about Ryan was the best idea got a feeling its gonna cause more trouble for them

Really hope they sit down and talk things through properly soon... really want them to just stay happy for a long long while lol

update soon

[MatildaHunterFan]

Hi Danni!!

Commenting again, I'm so sorry I didn't the last couple of chapters but I was so busy....

Great chapters, I hope that Charlie and Brax will work it out.

Looking forward to more

Sandy xx

[Zetti]

Ah Charlie/Brax..they really need to talk to each other..

[~Zoe~]

Great writing

[beebee]

Good chapter

But I'm still nervous as all hell

Please update soon xx

[beebee]

Great update

Had to laugh at Charlies comment about Jacob being at a nightclub & the girls being at a late night movie lol

The picture Jacob drew for Brax sounded sooo cute ....

Still nervous bout Charlie not telling Brax about Ryan ... But I just keep telling myself that their happiness is just around the corner ... Man I hope so ...

Please update soon xx

[pembie]

Brax come on man. pop the question already. and go away Ryan

Loved Paige and Reiley in this chapter with the whole ladybug thing.

Brax and Charlie's chat was quite sad.

Very good chapter Danni.

[RoRo90]

I have a feeling Brax is starting to rethink the whole no marriage thing... I hope I am right and its not just wishful thinking lol

glad that Jacob drew that picture for Brax

the girls are just too cute... I laughed with the whole lady bug thing especially when Paige said 'I no have it you cant'... and Riley 'it my 3 day'... they are just too adorable

Charlie should really tell Brax about Ryan, really don't want this causing any more problems for them, they have had enough drama already, just really want some happy Chax

eagerly looking forward to your next update