lozlovesh&a Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Uh oh. I hope Nicole would be alright. Please continue. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Hope Nicole's okay, hopefully Roman will find her.Looking forward to more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 I hope Nicole will be okay. Brilliantly written as always, well done. I look forward to more and seeing where you take this. Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Very well written chapter very intense stuff I don't like the sound of what will happen next another death which will break the family apart Quote
Inactive User Posted August 29, 2011 Report Posted August 29, 2011 Such a great well-written chapter! Well done Hope Nicole will be okay and found in time Update soon Quote
Zetti Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Thanks for the comments I am writing the next chapter now & I should have it done for tonight. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Give me a couple of moments to recover the power of speech...What?!?!?! Penn is incredibly creepy and I'm a bit worried about what he might do to Nicole.And then that ending...You killed Angelo?!I was definitely not expecting that... Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Far out...... has no words..... except that Penn is evil. I was not expecting that. Continue please. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 penn killed angelo! I was not expecting that! Hope nicole will be okay great chapter zetti Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Oh no! When I logged onto this fic, it was on the last page and someone had already commented that Angelo had been killed by Penn so I was then expecting it ... but not like that. Amazingly written though as always Zetti. I am very worried for Nicole though so make everything okay ... I'm not going to talk to myself, I'm not going to talk to myself ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote
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