HighwayUnicorn Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Er ... yeah ... I'll just be repeating everything everyone else has said basically ... Interesting though ... Angelo's actually alive ... A great chapter, really well done and I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 I have just fell off my chair in shock Naa not really. Yay Angelo's back but Jack wasn't expecting him to pop up wonder how he will fit into this story. ERRRR Nicole why oh why did you sleep with Penn answers on a postcard I can't work her out I'm a bit worried for Aden could you have tricked us all making us think that Angelo was your 2nd death? You did say you had 2 deaths planned is that right? Look forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Great chapter! Um...whoa...Belle's alive??? :o Such a interesting twist you had written there! Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 OMG......... Belle's alive? So she didn't have cancer in this story? Confusing..... but yay. Please continue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Okay, so...everyone's alive?The chances of Roo popping up and saying it was all a big mistake seem pretty high, frankly.Intriguing the direction this is going, looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 My head hurts I'm confused but look forward to more very intriguing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 I did read this the other day but have only just got the chance to comment ... THANK YOU! I had NO idea, by the way, that you were bringing back Belle ... or at least mention that she's alive! Eeeek! This is friggin' amazing! I loved that update and look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 YAY Penn is dead, Penn is dead, Penn is dead... or hopefully anyways lol. Poor Jack going through all that. Please. continue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 Woah.Loved Nicole's reaction to Jack turning up alive.The showdown between Jack and Penn was actually quite powerful.Looking forward to the conclusion! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 Great chapter Liked Nicole's reaction to Jack turning up alive Whoa the showdown at the ending was so powerful and well-written! Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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