Samantha28 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 I can't wait to see them finally reunite!!! Brilliantly written! Looking forward for more!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 I thought it was a nice little chapter there. I look forward to reading more. Brax ... Carina xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Nice little chapter Good to see what Joyce is thinking hmm he going to let Brax go back to Charlie in a week somehow I don't think so a lot can happpen in a week in Summer Bay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Great little chapter please continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Sorry for hardly posting on this, I have been on holiday and was unaware of it. I will post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel90 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Sorry i been away so havent been able to comment... Plz let him return or make Brax find a way to contact Charlie without Joyce knowing.. So Charlie can have a go at Joyce... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted November 22, 2011 Report Share Posted November 22, 2011 OMG! I have totally forgotten about this site and have finally gotten back. Even had to request a new pass word. >.> I will be posting, I just have to re-read everything I've done to get a glimpse of what I said and what would come up. Great, refreshing memory time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted November 22, 2011 Report Share Posted November 22, 2011 I read it all, though when I said that I killed Brax! I was like "NO!" Totally forgetting that I had brought him back Okay, I totally, don't know how I can write this now, when I've totally lost inspiration for it. Though, I will work on it. I promise. Post when inspiration starts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Great chapter. More soon please xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Okay here goes! Chapter 12 - Escape. Brax wanted back with Charlie so bad and his kidnapper Joyce had left for dinner and Brax made his escape stealing some ladies car, and taking off down the highway aiming to get the airport in time before Joyce had noticed he was gone. Brax got there and was on the plane within 20 minutes of arrival. He had just got away from Joyce as Joyce had arrived, he saw him in the glass looking at the plane. Brax was so mad that he got taken away from Charlie, the love of his life. Who was probably on the verge of over him. Brax arrived back to his house where Heath was sitting drowning his sorrows, "That inspector kidnapped me and wouldn't let me leave for ages." Heath jumped, "Why'd he do that?" "Wants Charlie to himself!" growled Brax. "Does he know you've gone?" asked Heath, hugging his brother. "So he told everyone you were dead and whoa!" "I thought he said that I had to go for my own problems..." mused Brax. "Nope, told us you were dead!" muttered Heath. "Wow. Yes he would know by now that I've gone and that a car has been stolen, can I go see Charlie? Or would it be too much and should I just leave again?" asked Brax. "I'll call over," said Heath. "You two are getting along?" stumbled Brax. "Yeah, ever since you left we had to help each other and Case," said Heath. "Hey Charlie, Joyce had captured Brax and kept him captive, he escaped he's back you should come round," said Heath. A pause erupted. "Awesome, see you then," said Heath. "She's on her way," said Heath putting his phone in his pocket. Well it's short, but I -HAD- to let him get back! I couldn't let him miss the birth! Never could, never would! So people What did you think!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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