xGlowingAngelx Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 (edited) You have NO idea how much I squeeled when I saw this posted!!! The first chapter and it's all gone wrong already!!! I've already got this face on: What on earth has Angelo done?! I adore that not only does Rob see Angelo as his father, but they have a daughter together! So sweet! (or, it would be, if they weren't apart ). He hurt Nicole? Like, physically? Or just emotionally? Either way, bad Angelo! EDIT: No, wait, it must be physcial, hence the restraining order. Do they use those for emotional abuse? The idea of Angelo hurting Nicole hurts my heart. Also, just have to say, I *adore* these two lines: She didn’t mind being the bad guy if it kept her children safe. What a perfect line, and so true of a mother (not that I'd know that). She wished that her daughter could stay at that age, where sadness meant nothing because a hug would make her feel better. ... Wow. That's very powerful. I like it. Also, YEY! More Roman!!! Fabulous start, Zetti. Even if it is all sad, confusing and angsty already. Something tells methis is going to be an emotional one. Edited May 31, 2011 by xGlowingAngelx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Woah, good start, really curious about what Angelo has done to Nicole to make her react like that. Looking forward to seeing where you take it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 YAY You posted this already I'm liking this What has Angelo done I wonder how could he hurt Nicole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Whoooaaa *whistles loudly* This is a amazing start to this fanfiction! Wondering what Angelo had done to Nicole in the last five years?? Update soon pleaseee xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Already a fantastic beginning for the sequel, Zetti. I do have a lot of questions though, inclusing what on earth has Angelo done to hurt Nicole? Although they should be answered ... sooner, rather than later, I hope. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 What on earth has Angelo done??? Loving it. Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deano Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Angelo, what have you done, you silly boy. I love it, another Angelo/Nicole fanfic :) You made my day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Thank you all for the comments. The answers to your question regarding Angelo's actions towards Nicole will answered in upcoming chapters x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Wah! What's Angelo done? A gripping beginning...! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Thanks Miranda I will try and update for over the weekend if I get a chance, am working on the chapter xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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