HighwayUnicorn Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 Er. Let's start on the positives shall we? Aden coming back was great. Brilliant. Loved it. Couldn't have had a better charcater come back into it. Angelo & Nicole were amazing in that update & Roo & Angelo's conversation was good too. The emotions, thoughts, feelings, etc were perfectly written, expressed & portrayed by everyone so that was very well written. & on a negative note; Why the hell did you kill Rob? How was that possibly fair? You do intend on doing a sequel though, right? Please? If you don't mind? Because that needs to continue ... Anyway, yeah, a great update & a fantastic fic all in all so really well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 Thanks everyone for the comments Its been a pleasure to write this fic especially with all the comments that you all leave It's also kind of inspiring that you've given it such a dramatic ending that leaves the door open for this whole new story (That's not a hint, unless you want it to be *cough*) of their grief and their relationship following such a traumatic event. You do intend on doing a sequel though, right? Please? If you don't mind? I am going to write a sequel... I think you might like the sequel, its not going to be as angsty as the previous two... & Red, I know it seemed incomplete, mainly because I wanted the ending to lead into the new fan-fiction I am going to post soon enough. I hope you all do stick with this story in my sequel Reflections...which will be up in the days to come Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 & Red, I know it seemed incomplete, mainly because I wanted the ending to lead into the new fan-fiction I am going to post soon enough. Fair enough, I did think it looked like it was meant to lead into something else but I didn't want to say anything in case I was wrong...Looking forward to it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 ZETTI!!!!!! I can't believe you killed him! So upset right now! I am now off to read Reflections but not sure how you can possibly make up for letting Rob die! Lisa x Ps. You are still one of my fave authors just because your writing and the twists you come up with are fantastic. Still upset with you though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 Thanks Lisa. I can't please you all haha & thanks I appreciate the fact that you like my writing. & Red, glad you're looking forward to it because I am posting it tonight. Can't resist & glad you noticed that it was going to lead to another one. I will shut up now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 Sorry Zetti that I never commented on the last 2 chapters untill now I have loved reading this fic its been so good the twists have been really shocking Its sad that you killed Rob off but I was sadly expecting it Did you bring Aden back for Carina by any chance I'm not too sad that this has ended because I see that you have posted the follow up story so YAY Well Done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 Great chapter! Whoa at the ending! Poor Rob Yay I noticed you had posted another sequel so I am off to read it xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 Thanks peeps & pembie I bought Aden in for myself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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