A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action (by Miranda) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Some nice stuff in there.Is that Ruby gone for good?Wasn't expecting that.Also very intrigued by that end bit...

[Miranda]

Yes, Carina, I feel really sad its over so soon too. I wish I'd strung it out over a few more weeks but real life is calling... And my stories are as long as they are, they decide when to end really

I hope no one's expecting a definitive neatly tied up ending. I don't do those, but it will be in sympathy with the rest of the story i.e. they won't all die (or will they dun dun DUR)

Yes, Red, I kind of thought 'poor Ruby, she's going off with Heath' But I also thought 'mm, she's going off with Heath'

[HighwayUnicorn]

It usually depends on the content & the storyline though

But I do look forward to reading the last chapter ... so update soon

[Zetti]

I cant believe its ending

I dont like the end of things but if you write another fic then I will be happy

You wrote it really well especially with Casey and the river boys

I am intrigued as to who the strangers are but the ending was good

Looking forward to the next update dont leave it too long please Mrs Miranda

[Jen]

You know I like everything about this. Dex getting invovled in a fight, Romeo snapping when the River Boy went near Nicole, the Casey/Brax talk, and Ruby going off with Heath (Why is that so attractive to me?). I can't believe it's going to be over. I wonder if Romeo and Casey will get their happy ending?

Another cliffhanger. I wonder who will be coming back -- potential ex-boyfriend? *wink, wink* And will we find out why Mink is actually back? These are the questions I need answered .

[Inactive User]

Had been reading every chapter of this fanfiction and wow it is really good! I liked it You are a amazing writer Pity it's almost over But this is really good. Update soon *hugs* xx

[Miranda]

Thanks Zetti, Jen and Jarliefan I am just tinkering with the final pieces of the jigsaw. I'm not sure who will think what about the ending, but I will post it later today when I feel strong enough not to cry (dear oh dear, I'm a temperamental artiste, I think I've got too involved in this story!)

I think Ruby is probably going to pastures new where she can work her way through the River Boys one by one, or whatever. Not that I dislike her at all

Jen, I'd love to know who you think is returning, you've intrigued me with your 'potential ex boyfriend' but I suppose you'll tell me afterwards.

See you on the other side, guys

[Miranda]

I’ve loved writing this story . I’ve had such a laugh, and feel really sad now it’s all over . Hopefully it’ll live on forever in the dusty archives of BTTB.

The bits I liked writing best were:

Romeo and Nicole’s 'brother sister' chat after she came home from hospital;

Romeo and Xavier discussing Romeo’s new status outside the church;

Romeo implying Heath is secretly in love with him Talk about psyching out Heath, it worked like a dream didn't it!

The way Casey bosses Romeo around and tells him what to do all the time. Romeo needs someone who does that, otherwise he’d never do anything....

I'm glad BTTB-ers have enjoyed my story, I have a feeling there will be a lot of stories in future about Casey Braxton...!

Edited March 29, 2011 by Miranda

[lozlovesh&a]

Awwwww. The end.

I loved it! I especially loved that you made Aden come back for Nic. That was a really nice touch! And Romeo & Casey got there happy ending too.

I hope you write more stories cos your really good, I have enjoyed reading this.

[Zetti]

I cant sum up how awesome that was. I am crying now

It was sooo good! Yayy for bringing Aden back

Casey/Romeo

The ending couldnt have been better.

I loved reading it and I hope you write more fic soon missy!