A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action (by Miranda) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another fantastic chapter Loved the ending of that chapter.

Well done Just, beautifully written, fantastic.

Love Carina xxx

[lozlovesh&a]

Loved it. Like how morag is ok with them and wanting to help Casey. Continue soon please.

[Red Ranger 1]

Liked the way you wrote Morag.The penny dropping for Ruby and her reaction were amusing.Wonder how Indi's going to react...

[Zetti]

Oooh whats Indi going to do!

More Casey/Romeo so cute!

[Jen]

I don't know what you mean about Eduardo, sorry. I just picked a Spanish/ Portuguese sounding name. I don't even know who Andrew Garfield is, can you enlighten me? Then I can go: oh... HIM!

Well, Andrew Garfield is a British actor who played Eduardo Saverin in The Social Network. He is sort of ridiculously good looking, and as soon as you brought up that name my mind automatically went there.

There will be some more about Dex, April, Xavier, not deep and meaningful though

I am totally okay with this

As for the last chapter, all I have to say is -- Romeo and Casey bickering, and prodding each other, and being slightly snarky, and not afraid of totally making out in public -- They are so married. And I mean that in the best way possible .

[Miranda]

Andrew Garfield.... oh.... HIM!

Glad you approve Jen Watch this space

Re: Morag. Did you notice how Casey outstared her? Scary.

Edited March 21, 2011 by Miranda

[HighwayUnicorn]

Wow. That was amazingly written - the emotions were perfect & everyone was so in character.

Brilliantly written. I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

Aww Damn. That was better than I imagined!

[Red Ranger 1]

Loved the start with Ruby wittering on.Woah, Romeo and Casey have gotten...pretty close.Liked the little bit with Heath and Brax.You're doing a really good job of bringing all the different characters into this and making their parts seem like part of the bigger story.

[lozlovesh&a]

Loved it as usual! Continue soon pls.