H&A_diehard Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Half-way decent? It was as excellent as always mate. I thought their talk was going quite well til Aden misunderstood what she was trying to say. Please, please make it better. I know you will really. Well, I hope you will. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle fan. Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Aww that was sad hopefully they'll make up soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 As much as I don't like them fighting, that was a really good chapter; the picture of Belle curling away from Aden broke my heart And I hate that IPS thing...it always does that to me... Can't wait for the next one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 (edited) I just hope that it doesn't turn you off Belle completely. Nothing could ever turn me of Belle forever. Shes my all time favourite H&A character. I'm happy to see that there is reason coming for this Amanda stuff. I don't mind seeing them fight (love it actually) it's just that Amanda isn't being her fiesty self anymore. It's like shes scared to have an opinion. Anyway looking forward to that storyline between them. I loving this storyline with Belle doubting herself. It makes so much sense for someone like her to feel like that. I'm glad that she still wants to marry Aden though. And also love how protective she is over the baby. That scene when she thought Aden had implied she could get an abortion was my favourite. It's good that Irene is being there for her. Poor Aden. The end was so sad. Edited November 12, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 aww *tear* that was sad Taniya! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Awww poor Belle! Can't wait to see what happens next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matilda Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Aww that was so sad. I just knew that Belle wouldn't let Aden in. She's such a feisty, independent character that's it's understandable. I hope they make up soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beate Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 That was a good but sad chapter. I hope they talk things trough soon and make up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 The ending wasn't rushed at all! It was perfect! ...and when i say perfect i mean like absoloutely PERFECT!!!! I loved that fight, the way you conveyed Aden's emotions and how he was trying to make Belle understand was brilliant and yet the way Belle reacted made perfect sense when thinking about it from her POV! Fantastic chapter, really amazing, as in WOW standard! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 That chapter is the best one you have written so far, the way you conveyed their feelings made it really powerful. Hope you write more soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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