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Aden isn't OOC in this. Yes he is incredibly sweet and buys the most perfect gifts and says the most perfect things and really close to perfect but the way he says things and the way he acts makes it believable and all the angst and his reaction towards his father and other stuff balances it out. Hes still sarcastic and cheeky (whole three fics) and still likes to shut people out when he doesn't want to deal with stuff(untroubled) so he hasn't changed completely. Hes just growing up and is alot more happy. Thats the way I see it anyway.

I loved Annies excitement over the baby. Also how you added how hard it's gonna be for her to keep it a secret because (from the show) you know Annie and secrets don't go well together. I loved Geoff's line about thinking what Belle would do to her to as motivation for Annie not to say anything.

So happy Aden and Belle worked everything out. Aden is so wise. I think hes been taking lessons from Roman.

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Hehe

“I hate you.” She mumbled, loud enough for him to hear though.

“Love you, too.”

“Don’t!” Belle warned, grabbing onto Nicole’s wrist as her hand hovered an inch away from her stomach. She had been in the house less than a minute before the teen had came hurtling down the stairs, throwing her arms around her to pull her into a hug. Startled, Belle had only reacted to push her away, fearing for her own life, and sanity, as Nicole’s tight embrace.

“What?” She asked her innocently.

“Just because I’m pregnant, doesn’t mean you can touch me whenever you want.” Belle informed her with a slight scowl.

Again, Hehe

Loved it :D

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