MrsL Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Im speechless so good but that doesn't do the chapter justice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradyell Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 i'm speachless and crying! Not a good combo for writing a comment! As usual it was truly brilliant the scene between Geoff and Roman was so Aden was so brilliant with Tristan! Damn stupid desk!! he died a hero though. Loved it despite the tears and sadness Louise which is a true testament to how brilliant your writing is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitmanfan Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 how do you do it?, every time! So glad I made the move to read this in peace, that was there was no need to explain the tears! I can't pic the best bit, it was all so well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Once again I had to stop reading to go get a tisssue especially when Belle was talking about how she wasn't finished loving him. I really really really wish Aden wasn't gone!! Update soon xxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Great chapter.Good to get the story of what happened to Aden, made all the more tense because we knew it wasn't going to end well.Loved the chat between Geoff and Roman with Roman breaking down and then the little chat between Geoff and Nicole.And even the little bit of Belle admitting she had to send Geoff to identify the body and her final remembrances.And as for that ending...Well, I really wanna know where you're going to go next with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 OMG OMG OMG... How do you do it? You've made me cry! Every single chapter of yours is AMAZING, EXCELLENT, BRILLIANT! It was written sooooooo well - truly beyond brilliant. Still can't believe he's gone. Like someone else said, he died a Hero though. Love the little quote from SS.. Cannot wait for more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I can't pic the best bit, it was all so well written. I know I wrote it but if I had to choose I think my favourite bit would be "Who's going to call me Princess now?". I cried so much writing it! Thanks for the lovely comments guys and for sticking with me even though I killed Aden off! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I miss Aden He was so sweet trying to help that kid. And he died saving that girl Poor Belle and Jamie and... everyone! Glad Nicole's told Geoff how she feels, hope he chooses her So well written! Can't wait for more EDIT: It's weird, even though I knew Aden had died. When I was reading part of me was just hoping he would be okay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bikinikill Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 You Louise, are too brilliant for your own good. You're in the wrong career. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 That was epic.. As usual! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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