Shattered Glass

[~Zoe~]

Brillaintly written Louise, but it was sad, very heartbreaking

[bradyell]

my heart is completely and utterly broken

that was one of the saddest things i have ever read

Louise you stun me! seriously!! i don't know where you find the words!

i honestly believe that your big ambition could be a possibility!

we'll see your name in print one day i'm sure!!!!!

so, so sad

[littlemiss]

*sniff*

Was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good Louise. Poooooor Jamie

[hitmanfan]

Oh Louise, so heartbreaking.

I feel for both of them, Poor Jamie- I hope he doesn't start to think that Aden would lie to him, and Belle - being rejected by him and losing Aden

[HAA Girl 08]

:( THAT WAS SOOOOO SAD!

HEARTBREAKING.......... Beautifully written Louise!

[leah1234]

I had to stop reading that halfway through during jamie finding out to get a tissue!!! I couldn't see the screen

I think that that was partially because I just found out my friend's mam has about two days of life left!

But that was just heartbreaking... oh god I can't tell just how amazingly written that was

update soon

xxxxxxx

[KaiyaBlake]

[Louise_2983]

Thanks guys. Sorry to hear about your friend's mum Leah. I cried a lot when writing this.

[Red Ranger 1]

Absolutely, completely, 100% brilliant.You nailed the reactions perfectly, Belle struggling to find the words, Jamie unable to understand, Roman making things worse every time he tried to help, a horrible situation that could never end well.Really, really good.Well worth waiting for.

[Adelle_fan1000]

Louise.. that was excellent.... The way you wrote jamies Reaction was great. im sure any child his age would react just that way

I'm actually in tears.. first fic to make me cry..

Well done

and im also sorry to hear about your dad! i lost mine 7 years ago this year