Taniya_K Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Wow. That was just wow. Glad you finsihed your list, lol! But I can't believe that girl died after all that! I was dreading that, esp after she said that she could go on listening to him for the rest of her life Poor Aden. I understand why you didn't put much humor into this chapter, but I loved his lines like always. The bit with Ruby was particularly sad. That ending was Trust Belle to simply say 'the 'L' word' when confessing her love to him Cannot wait for more. xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 That was so good!! Poor Aden, he's so cut up about it I feel so sorry for the girl!! Awww then ending they 'L' each other Really looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 “It’s a pity you’re late guys,” Aden said softly to the rescue team, tears were falling down his cheeks, “You missed one hell of a nice girl.” AH here now, that bit was way too sad for me! .... The rest of the two chapters were fab, but that one tore at the heart - reminded me of the film World Trade Centre Fabulous writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luc Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 (edited) Thanks Taniya, Laura and Symphony! I'll be updating soon, I just hope nobody's bored of it yet! If you are, there's only nine, maybe ten chapters left! Here's a preview of the next chapter, which is currently nameless. “It was one of those days when you wake up in the morning and gotta go right back to sleep from the effort,” He called out to the entire news team. A few people grinned at him, and others laughed, “It was one of those days when you turn up at the newsroom after a week and a half of being in a hospital, and hope people will notice you’re wearing a silly hat,” “Hey, he’s wearing a silly hat,” Annie called out as she walked in from the corridor, “I got lucky!” Aden replied, patting the girl gently on the back, “The newsroom was pretty much like I remembered it,” He began, walking through some desks, “A bunch of mean eyed guys who looked like they knew how to use a typewriter, and a bunch of cool looking broads who looked like they knew how to use a guy,” A few more people laughed as Aden sat down on the edge of Ruby’s desk Edited January 31, 2009 by Luc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 i'm totally not bored of it - it's one of the few fics that makes me laugh out loud love it - don't ever want to see it end - it can just like be a lifetime writing thing [nod] yup! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Definately not getting bored of it! I love this fic. It never fails to make me laugh, and it's so original! The next chapter, as always, sounds good! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Nope, definately not getting bored of it!!! its a great fic Cant wait for the next update ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 “Belle, do you feel as though you have to win this conversation?” I loved this quote. I reckon its true though, Belle would want to win every fight or conversation. Lovely chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 “Belle, do you feel as though you have to win this conversation?” I loved this quote. I reckon its true though, Belle would want to win every fight or conversation. Lovely chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Loved that Mel wanted to know what Belle was wearing I also loved Aden and Belle once again!! that ending was so funny lol Really well written, very funny banter!! Looking forward to reading more The iddea for the little fics explaining some of the stuff sounds great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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