Symphony Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 LOL @ radioactive lizards - where oh where do you get your ideas from! Poor Jessie; I hope Angelo manages to help her I actually laughed out loud at the Belle & stairs scene! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 (edited) The last two chapters were really funny as usual. I'm loving Angelo more and more. Especially the way he realised no one took him serious. I loved the speech to Jessie about what he was. Jessie is really growing on me. I like her. Even though this is such a funny story, Jessie's storyline still feels like it belongs here. Poor Jessie. Hopefully Angelo will be able to help her. Aden and Belle are still cute. I loved Aden and Drew's conversation. It was hilarious. Edited January 23, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 I can see why it's your favourite. I loved this chapter. Belle and Angelo working together was awesome. I loved her pointing out how similiar they are. And who knew Angelo could get so passionate about something. I also loved Aden's suspicions. He definitely is getting abit paranoid. Looks like Melody's comment really got to him. I liked it. So funny. Nice way to use Todd. I also liked that part about what she did after he dumped her. Belle seriously has anger issues, even has a kid. The next chapter isn't sounding good for everyone, but it sounds really interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Loved it!! seriously one of my faves Loved Belle and Angelo, thought that was really well done Aden's paranoia's set in lol You got Todd in!!! i couldnt remember if you'd already used Charlotte but i noticed that too Love that she hit Todd over the head with a cricket bat! such a funny visual lol Looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 I think that was one of my favs chapters too! It was so brilliantly written and so touching too. I'm glad that they found a way to get through to Jessie and persuaded her to tell someone! That Belle and Angelo stuff was too good. It was funny and serious at the same time. Awesome! Aden - lol! Aw, he's really paranoid, isn't he?! Loved how you got Todd into it. Poor guy though. He should've known better than to break up with Belle. Loved the way she told Aden that he wasn't her latest blonde cos she's had several since him! That's not going to help... Getting Charlotte in - and aying she looked freakishly like Annie - was great! Cannot wait for more! Although it's not sounding so good... xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 LOL brilliant ending at the end - that was gas! Is Aden in there though?! And who's the trapped woman? Stewart Road; love it! Don't leave us hanging too long! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 at the ending! Loved the whole chapter! I like that they've got a massive newsreport to do now, and how Belle wanted to give it some 'zap'! Totally Belle! I hope Aden's not in that building!! Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Loved the ending!!! I hope Aden's not in there!!!! Loved the whole chapter, so so good Cannot wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Oh dont worry, you can get rid of Melody!! Awww Aden!! i hope that girls ok Belle was sweet worrying about him and Geoff was too fpr trying to calm her down! Loved it all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Oh no! I like Melody in this! But I guess there are a few other characters that are a MUST to keep, so if you have to let her go then you should... Anthoer brilliant chapter! Aden!! Lol at him though. Loved how humorous he was able to remain in such a situation! I hope he manages to help that girl out somehow... Belle stressing out about Spike was great! Goes to show she's really into him. Geoff was being an awesome friend, again! Cannot wait for more! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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