Zetti Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 :o Its nearly finished!! :( This is a fantastic chapter and I hope that you do another fic after this one even if the updates are miles apart! Please?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 ewwwww...Angelina Jolie. Jack could do so much better, like Jessica Alba I have to agree there! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Awesome chapter! Jack and Martha are so adorable together I hope they last forever and ever Great ending to the story. But the bad thing is... it’s over! *cries* I feel like writing ’more please’, but there’s no point in that. Hoping that you’ll write more. You’re a great writer! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aejdude Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Great ending!!! The way you left it was great. I've loved this fic so much! Upset it's over I think it's a really great achievement to be able to finish a fic because i've never managed it with any of my fics either people stop reading commenting or i just stop getting the inspiration to carry on so people really do underestimate how great of an achievement it is. Okay, i'll stop now. at it being in the Adult Section. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 It's over! *cries* Great romantic chapter! It was perfect, so was the entire fic! I love the description of the landscape. It almost felt like I was there. Martha and Jack forever and always!!! I can't wait until you start writing a new fic. You really did a great job, Rachel! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Its over But that last chapter was brilliant, very descriptive Jack and Martha They were so adorable in this fic Hope we get to see more of your writing I loved this fic it was awsome I cant say update soon so I'll just say great work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jess Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 It's over! *cries* I've never been a massive Jack&Martha fan, *ducks and hides*, but there was just something about the way you wrote this - maybe it had something to do with the fact that they went from best friends to lovers, and I can totally identify with that (no, I won't bore you with my life story here!) - that I found it so readable and appealing, and not like a lot of the other J&M stuff on here. That was such a cute and adorable last chapter and, oh, I want a boyfriend like Jack! Thankyou for such an engaging and superbly written story, Rach; even if I have been a bit of a silent appreciator - my bad, sorry! I'm really gonna miss this - I hope we get to see more of your work soon! Please? But not after you've taken a, well deserved, break, of course! (Unless you want to treat us to something sooner, obviously!) - Jessi. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x_kym_x Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Aww loved the last chapter! It was an excellent ending but i'm really sad thats it finished But i just want to say thank you because i've really enjoyed this fic! Your writing was always brilliant and you always updated quickly so it was easy to get into Well i loved the whole of this fic so if u ever do decide to write another one i'll love u forever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Jack and Martha It's all over I've loved the Jack and Martha interaction in this fic, the friends/lovers was a great idea to explore Hopefully we'll get to see more of your writing one day!! Congrats on a fantastic fic Rachel! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-x-Siana-x- Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 Rachy!!! Noooo!!! I don't want this to finish!!! Why does it have to finish! *Sad crying face* It was brilliant... I'm like going to start crying in a minute or something! Anyways!!!.... That last chapter... it was sooo cute! They make such a cute couple... but hey we all already knew that! “Open up” he cooed as he did the aeroplane game with the food; flying it down from the air and into her mouth. She giggled as she caught the food between her teeth, “You’re such a loser” she poked him in the stomach as she chomped on her cracker. “But you love my loser antics” he grinned at her. “Very true” she nodded, “no one does them quite like you Jacky” she grinned back at him before raising her eyebrows. Haha!!! Jacky he's just pure... well.. cuteness Awww I love his looser antics... But hey!!! Jackys no loser!!!! Rachy... quite frankly im shocked at that! YOU called him a loser!!! *Sad Face* :-( Hmmmm Jacky did take a awful long time to make that fire... I'm sure Martha could have done soooo much better!!!! GIRL POWER!!! (Yay) “I’m quite proud of my efforts actually” he gloated, “there’s not a lot of men that can say they’ve lit a fire all by themselves. Yet another reason why I’m so darn perfect” he smirked. “Haha! Yeah” she raised her eyebrows at him, “you just keep telling yourself that” she muttered just loud enough for him to hear. “Hey!” he laughed as he grabbed a handful of grass and threw it at her, “You’re only jealous”. “Oh, yeah, I’m really jealous” she rolled her eyes. ^^^^ Sombodies head is about to explode Jacky! :-P But I guess something good came out of the last chapter.... She nodded as she laughed softly, before shuffling around and coming within inches of his face. Leaning into him she rested her cheek alongside his, closing her eyes she rubbed against his skin, before whispering seductively into his ear, “I want you”. So hey Rachy... I finally forgive you for being mean to them both in the other chapters! They're together Everything is romantic Everything is perfect That makes the following equation Together + Romantic + Perfect = JnM Love Awwww!!! :-) Bless Them! And another thing that has really made me extra proud of you was that we you wrote JnM sex... Again... And that always makes me happy Hehe!!! So overall i think we can very safely say..... (Well many things actally... here's a list :-P) 1) Thank you soooo much for writing such a fantastic fic (Even if yo were nasty to Jacky on numerous occasions) 2) Thats another amazing fiction completed and as always the writing was brilliant 3) This was what I looked foward to reading a update of every couple of days... (Yes I know I have no life) i'm really going to miss this one..... I could go on forever... but you know I got this stupid Drama c/w to do *Angryness* How Annoying... But oh well!!! But hey look on the bright sides of things.... At least now you've finished this you wont have to listen to me rambelling on replying (Like im doing now :-P) But anyways Rachy.... THANK YOU For writing such an amazing and entertaining fic It is very appreceated And you're an amazing writer!!! Make sure you tell me as soon as yo write another one Well thats if you do... But you will... wont you!... We both know you will!!! Anyways promise last little bit now... I will really miss this I'm going to cry or something! :-( Siany__x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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