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I cannot believe this is happening, how can Martha just set each other up like that!

I think it definitely is a bad thing now that Jack knows that Martha didn't tell him, i bet he's going to think that she didn't like the love they had before. Thats why she hasn't told him; because she realises that she didn't actually love him as much as he loved her :(

Oh poor Jack, that isn't rue and Martha needs to tell him the truth about her real feelings before Jack does something stupid :(

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Ooo...great chapter. Loved it when Jack told Luc to "get lost" and he just scrammed :P Angry Jack is hilarious. I think Martha will get hurt by how close Jack and Joy get :P It'll be fun :wink:

More please :D

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Great chapter....Poor Jack and Martha...Loved it when he was shouting! Hmmm who's feelings get hurt...confused!! Like Nicole said I think it may be Jack's because Martha's the one who made up all the dates...so yeah but I would like it the other way round!! Update soon...xx

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I think Martha will get hurt by how close Jack and Joy get :P It'll be fun :wink:

I agree :D

Great update Bay Girl. I can't wait for them to go on their date's. Maybe then Martha will realise how special Jack is, even though it's so damn obvious :rolleyes: But, I am glad they got a few things sorted in the last chapter. I hate it when Jack's upset :(

Please update soon.

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I think Martha may remember their 1st date!!!!!!!!!

Get lost,” Jack told Lucas as he pointed towards the door. - Thought that was classic

I’m sorry,” Martha choked on the lump that was forming in her throat. - Made me upset

Martha laughed a little as she wiped her tears away. “I could never hate you; my heart wouldn’t allow it,” she told him as she leant forward and hugged him.- Then take him back :(

Update soon

Great chapter

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Awww, brilliant writing. I soooo love this fic. I think I just read about 5 chapters...

“I think I will, but now to the most important question. The guys; what are they like?” Joy smiled.

I think that's the first question I would ask if I ever went to Summer Bay!

Can't wait to see what happens on the dates, I hope it's Joy and her brother who get their feelings hurt :P .

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