*J&M* Posted March 20, 2007 Report Share Posted March 20, 2007 That was a cute chapter update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted March 20, 2007 Report Share Posted March 20, 2007 (edited) Great chapter, I really thought she was going to admit that she is in love with Jack when she was telling him what she remembered. Thats the great thing about your fan fictions the things that you least expect happen. Edited March 20, 2007 by shawtyy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Laura- Posted March 20, 2007 Report Share Posted March 20, 2007 That was such a good chapter Amber! My favourite so far i think! Martha and Jack are just so..... Poor Jack though, i bet hes so confused, i think Martha is too though. They both need to have a proper heart to heart talk i think. Not liking the sound of bad things happening in the next chapter but also cant wait to find out what happens so update when you get the chance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 20, 2007 Report Share Posted March 20, 2007 (edited) Wow that was amazing! Incredibly intense! And fantastically well written! Loving this! Why is Martha continuing to push him away? Whats wrong with her, that was the perfect oportunity for them to rekindle their relationship. But Noooo, Martha has to go and stuff it up. Shes gunna get her heart broken and its her own fault! Im sorry i had to say that, but its true! So im thinking, Jacks either going to sleep with Joy, or he'l ask Martha to move out cause he's just finding it too hard to live with her. Although i dont want either. Id rather Martha come to her senses, for Joy to get the outa the way, and for JnM to just get in on already! Please please please update soon Amber! Edited March 20, 2007 by vale4eva Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 You know how much I love this already and it just gets better and better! Poor Martha! I can't believe she's keeping her feelings from Jack, I was actually on the edge of my seat whn she remembered about being pregnant Alex, and then how she saw Jack and Joy together... Awwww.... Great writing amber, totally love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Awww i loved this chapter More soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 OMG!!! How the hell can Martha pull away from Jack like that! She has got some bloody good willpower! lol I hope Jacky stays at home and drowns his sorrows in beer so that Martha has to look after him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted March 26, 2007 Report Share Posted March 26, 2007 Joy turned around to glare at her brother. “Why did you have to open your fat mouth?” she sighed loudly. I think Joy should take her own advice. She shouldn't have opened her own mouth and pressured Jack into taking off his rings. Can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted March 26, 2007 Report Share Posted March 26, 2007 (edited) I'm not liking Joy. Stupid Joy... The "removing of the bands" was sad. And what made it worse was when Martha saw. She really loves him. Awww. Hopefully Jack is seeing this... Accident!? Who gets hurt? Hopefully Joy. Also, a personal note: I hate birds. They're all stupid and moronically tweety. I woke up at 6.15, just randomly as I turned over, and I heard birds outside my window. I smiled, and thought "awww". But then they wouldn't stop.. and I couldn't sleep... and... grrrr. I'm not impressed. I guess I'll go back now and see if I can have another half an hours sleep with James Morisson on... ideally I'd like to shoot all the flippin' birds. Edited March 26, 2007 by Nicom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 26, 2007 Report Share Posted March 26, 2007 Duh Joy, no-one can take Martha's place, the whole world knows that Great chapter too. I think maybe Jack gets in the accident on his way to see Martha??? Well i just dont want Martha in hospital again, its Jack's turn Great chapter. Joy sucks, but Jason rocks More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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