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That was amazing! I knew it'd be good but I underestimated you, lol.

I'm so glad you didn't just make her memory come back and they all live happily ever after; this is a way better ending. I loved the picnic paragraph with the banter etc. especially this “If it’s something dirty, don’t you think that it would be best if we waited until were inside and away from prying eyes?”

She looked deeply into his eyes and smiled. “Can we eat now?” she laughed. What a perfect closing line! I 'aww'ed about 10 times from start to finish, lol.

Can't wait for your new fic, if its even half as good as this I'll be hooked! You're an amazing writer, Amber. :D

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Wow, Cant believe its over :(

Excellent excellent fic Amber, as always. You never fail to amaze us :)

Martha and Jack are so cute :wub: And finally there a big happy family at long last.

Martha cracks me up :lol: Bless her.

Great fic Amber, looking forward to reading your next one

*runs to next fic*

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