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I am a little confused why did jack say "let's go joey"

I thought the baby was called Alexandria.

Joey is a baby Kangaroo- I thought that analogy was really cute! :) (I hope that's what you meant bay girl if not, I have embarrassed myself :huh: ) lol

Great opening; I'm really looing forward to seeing how this develops!

but Martha just isn't there at the moment. She's somewhere else.

Hmmm, hope she's not in hospital or something.

Can't wait for more! :)

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I think you're a bit confused. Martha and Jack are together, but Martha just isn't there at the moment. She's somewhere else.

Ooh, I just got loads ideas in my head.

First off, I was going to keep them in my head, but then I realised that the Amber I know wouldn't do that, so it's guessing time! :D lol

  • Hospital
  • Crazy Home
  • The Farmmmm

They're my guesses! :D

Great fic. Awww, lil' baby! :D lol. I know I'm going to get confused with Laila, aren't I? lol. I'm sure I'll cope.. :D

Glad you began another one to get me hooked. :D Update soon!

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Hospital

Crazy Home

The Farmmmm

They're my guesses!

Hmm, yer they're mine aswell, but I was also thinking what if Martha is in prison? I wonder if she's done anything wrong. Only way to find out is to read this fic whenever there are updates :D

Great opening chapter, looking forward to the next one :D

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