vale4eva Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 Hahahha, awwww, a poem Theyl surely fall in love over this Great chapter More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 awww...that was strange, a love poem about someone you hate That should be interesting More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted May 9, 2007 Report Share Posted May 9, 2007 Chapter 3 Jack went into his house. He went into his bedroom and closed over the bedroom. He reread the start of the poem. Jack smiled. He liked what Martha had come up with and took out a pen. He wrote down the rest of the poem. He read out the poem to himself; “I hate the way you talk to me, and the way you cut your hair. I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare. I hate your big dumb combat boots, and the way you read my mind. I hate you so much it makes me sick; it even makes me rhyme. I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie. I hate it when you make me laugh, even worse when you make me cry. I hate it that you're not around, and the fact that you didn't call. But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you. Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.” Jack was so proud of the poem that he and Martha came up with. He rang her and she came over. “You have it done! Already! It mustn’t be that good then” Martha said “Excuse me! It took me over and hour to write the end. It took you 15 minutes to write your half!” Jack said “Right, well let me see it then” Martha said Jack handed the piece of paper to Martha “You stopped at the line “I hate you so much it makes me sick; it even makes me rhyme” Jack laughed “I know where I f*cking stopped, Jack” snapped Martha “Jesus! It is that time of the month again” Jack said Martha gave him a dirty look. Jack smirked. “That will have to do” Martha said annoyed “Will have to do? What do you mean by that?” Jack snapped “I mean that, because you are to lazy to see what else you can come up with” Martha yelled “Jesus! It must actually be that time” Jack whispered to him “F*ck sake Jack! I am not on me fecking period! I just hate you so much. Everything about you sickens me. It makes me want to puke!” Martha said disgusted “You know what, Martha! Get out of my house!” Jack screamed “You have no right to come here and say that I could do better when you spend 15 minutes writing your half!” Martha looked at Jack. She was so p*ssed at him. She turned around and walked out the door slamming the door behind her. “Women!” Jack said rolling his eyes Poem from 10 Things I Hate About You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 10, 2007 Report Share Posted May 10, 2007 haha, i knew that poem sounded familiar. Great chapter. More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 10, 2007 Report Share Posted May 10, 2007 I like that poem Can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted May 10, 2007 Report Share Posted May 10, 2007 i love this Its so obvious they are in love and i love that poem and i love 10 things i hate about you update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 Thanks for the comments It is Zetti's turn to write the next chapter however she is starting her exams this week so there will be no updates for a good while. Good Luck is in your exams, Zetti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 18, 2007 Report Share Posted May 18, 2007 Teasers for when I do update Jack goes out with someone (not Martha ) Martha goes out with Kim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 19, 2007 Report Share Posted May 19, 2007 Martha and Kim??? I likey Jack and who?? Now update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 19, 2007 Report Share Posted May 19, 2007 Thankies to everyone who wished me good luck. Chapter 3 “Dad, I’m going out in a while” “Where?” “Out on a date” “A date with who?” “Mattie” “Nice one, treat her right” “I definitely will” “Good, I will she means a lot to me” Jack walked to Mattie to pick her up and he saw Martha sat on the beach in her bikini joking around with Kim and she was enjoying it. He got to Mattie and knocked on the door and Mattie opened. Jacks jaw opened wide with amazement at how good she looked in her dress that openly flowed by her sides and showed her body off. “Let’s go then” “I just want to say you look amazing” “Thank you I appreciate it” They walked to the restaurant called GPK and they asked the waiter for a patio table so they could watch the sunset as the day ended. When they had finished their meal and was waiting for the bill to arrive, there was a faint sound of music coming through and Jack stood up and asked Mattie for a dance. They danced for a long time and as they did Martha and Kim walked past and Martha spotted them and she had this feeling in her stomach She didn’t think anything of it but when she thought about it she realised she liked him. She didn’t know how it was possible as she hated him but she did like him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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