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Sorry, the reason there hasn't been an update is because I've been slow with the proofing - I never realised how busy it would be during the holidays and then when I went back to school as well! I will get it done really really soon. Sorry! :)

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Jade you're my new hero! Just what I needed to cheer me up.

Jess what can I say, the chapter after the one before...

I thought that just maybe it might have been a bit of an anticlimax but I should have known better. Loved it and yes!!!!!!! you finally did it...Sara has left the building. What an outburst, I know she was hurting but jeez, nasty, vindictive...

"...They are all my problem. You are my problem, little princess."
Even at this early hour, when the sun was only just peaking over the horizon, the incredible heat that came with the middle of summer was overwhelming. The back door remained unlocked, and I slowly pushed it open, not wanting to wake any one else who may have been dreaming peacefully in the house.

Great introduction, awesome description.

I loved the conversation with Ric aswell, about how Ric was joking around but then Lucas got all serious, really well written.

His words floated around in my head momentarily, but were quickly replaced by thoughts of her. She’d been there ever since we arrived back, her smile, her laugh, she was in my thoughts, in my dreams. Memories that I couldn’t escape taunted me, until I couldn’t escape her any more… even though I wasn’t sure if I wanted to.

I was almost screaming at him at this point! :lol:

Great chapter Jess, seriously loved it and Jade...more soon?

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Oh my god thanks Jade for posting it and Jess that was an absolutely brilliant chapter you don't know how happy you have made me, after are talks when you was planning this I really didn't expect that and wow Sara was such a cow to Matilda, now I just hope that you go all fluffy on me and make Matilda and Lucas a perfect couple again I need my fluff. :P

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Totally agree with Jackie. Bring on the Mattie and Lucas fluff Jess we love it. Brilliant chapter I cant believe Sara's outburst I didnt think she had it in her. I loved the conversation between Lucas and Ric the way you write their friendship is great I wish there bond was like that on the actual show. Im just praying now that Mattie and Lucas will sort things out and the foursome will be together again :wub:. Hope there is more soon and thanks for posting Jade.

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