gawguss_tiff Posted November 23, 2006 Report Share Posted November 23, 2006 awww how sweet he did all that for her i wish my boyfriend would do stuff like that for me more often but his attempts are lame lol like we would eat cheese sandwiches or something lol he's not very romantic lol i think maybe he thinks its less manly lol stupid man lol maybe i should make him read this give him a few ideas lol well awesome chapter im loving this story lol update asap! xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 24, 2006 Report Share Posted November 24, 2006 AWww...Martha is pregnant, i have so forgotten whats been happening in this fic, will go back and re-read it now. Great chapter though. Jack is so sweet. I want a hubby just like him Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted November 24, 2006 Report Share Posted November 24, 2006 aaaww jack i love him!!! i luv this fic but i got a feeling that somethings nt ryt....hmmm hope theres more soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 25, 2006 Report Share Posted November 25, 2006 Aww that is sooooooooo sweet, Jack is so adorable, that was such a great chapter, please update soon, i love this fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted November 25, 2006 Report Share Posted November 25, 2006 Awww so cute I havn't been on here in like a week cos I'm up at the Gold Coast and I just jumped on here glad we have a update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groovy_18 Posted November 26, 2006 Report Share Posted November 26, 2006 awww marthas pregnant yay i hope its not ash's baby i hate ash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran-Lizzie Posted December 1, 2006 Report Share Posted December 1, 2006 Dedicated to everyone who has replied xxxx Part 5 I feel so lucky to have Jack back after everything that happened between us. I have never felt so happy with anyone else but him. I want to spend the rest of my life with him. Me, Jack and our child. Well hopefully a few more children after that too. I want to spend the rest of my life with him, making him happy and him making me happy and raising our children in a happy and loving home. Today is the day of the first scan and I can’t wait to see our baby on that screen for the first time. This is such an amazing experience and Jack is the only person I would ever want to share it with. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Today is Martha’s first scan and I’m so excited, it will be the first time we get to see our baby. I just love her so much. I can’t believe I nearly lost her; I’m just so glad we found each other again and got back together. I thought that was it, it was over for good but its not and I’m not going to mess it up this time. I want to be with Martha for the rest of my life. We arrive at the hospital and get shown to a room to have the scan. They put the gel on Martha’s stomach and I then see our baby on the screen. Wow it is so amazing. “Ok from what I can see the baby looks like it is 4 months, it does sometimes happen especially first time round that you won’t notice you are pregnant even at this far on.” “Wow, I can’t believe I’ve been pregnant for 4 months and I’ve only just noticed.” I think about 4 months ago in my head and I know I was still with Martha then, just before we spilt. So the baby had to be mine, didn’t it? “Jack isn’t this amazing. It’s definitely your Jack I would say if it wasn’t yours, it’s our baby Jack” “I know it is, and it’s going to be the most amazing baby ever. I love you Mrs Holden.” “I love you too Mr Holden and our baby too.” “I love our baby too very much” I say kissing her tenderly and stroking her stomach as I do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted December 1, 2006 Report Share Posted December 1, 2006 Awww! I hope it is his now! or it could be Corey's? lol Any chance of a gay scene between Ash and Jack?lol going to get killed by tasha when she sees that Nice writing fran, can I call you Fran? Sory I will stick to Fran Lizzie. *hmmpf* back to doing homework on nappy changing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran-Lizzie Posted December 1, 2006 Report Share Posted December 1, 2006 Lol No chance of a gay scene in this fic lol. But I may write another fic Yeah you can call me Fran or Frances as that is my name but it was already taken as a username so I chose Fran Lizzie cause Elizabeth is my middle name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted December 1, 2006 Report Share Posted December 1, 2006 lol Ohh another fic! can't wait I think it should be Jack and..... Robbie the other will love that and Martha can be the jealous ex. It sounds good though - Fran Lizzie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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