loobieloo Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Very cute awww they still love each other. And I'm glad Martha finally realised how much of a scumbag Ash is. Can't wait for a update Hope they get nack together soon. Ash isn't a scumbag! He's just took the wrong paths a few times. You leave my Ash alone Great Start, Gutted Ash has gone More soon please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Great Start, Martha doesn't love Ash and Jack doesn't love Sam, thats perfect Can't wait to see where this goes, please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Can't wait, hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Very cute awww they still love each other. And I'm glad Martha finally realised how much of a scumbag Ash is. Can't wait for a update Hope they get nack together soon. Ash isn't a scumbag! He's just took the wrong paths a few times. You leave my Ash alone Great Start, Gutted Ash has gone More soon please. Lora I cant believe you said i am shocked!!!! Great 1st chapter im loving it already then again I love all J/M fic !!! Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BelieveInMe Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Great start! Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Very cute awww they still love each other. And I'm glad Martha finally realised how much of a scumbag Ash is. Can't wait for a update Hope they get nack together soon. Ash isn't a scumbag! He's just took the wrong paths a few times. You leave my Ash alone Great Start, Gutted Ash has gone More soon please. Lora I cant believe you said i am shocked!!!! Great 1st chapter im loving it already then again I love all J/M fic !!! Update soon Yer, I can't believe you said that! I am glad that he has gone, I think other people are too. that was a great chapter, please update soon, can't wait to see where this goes, hopefully they'll get back together, Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran-Lizzie Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Dedicated to PINK, Sam =), Gawguss_tiff, Jack4Martha, Willz, Nicom, <3AmyMatthews, xxgulcanxx, loobieloo, Jacksthehottest, Home&Awaygal, Beckyboo, BelieveInMe and JackandMartha4eva. Part 2 It had now been 2 days since I had seen Jack on the beach and I’m missing him like crazy. I miss seeing him everyday, I miss being with him. I miss everything about him the way he smells, so gorgeous. The way he used to kiss me, he is a very good kisser he makes me feel like I’m in a dream. I’ve never felt that way with anyone else. I need to be with him, I need to tell him. So that’s what I’m going to do right now. I’m on my way to his place, the apartment we used to live in together. I get to the door and I’m just about to knock when the nerves take over. I can’t do this, I dumped him he won’t want me back will he? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I finished things with Sam. I couldn’t stay with her knowing I didn’t love her. How I couldn’t love her I can love anyone else when I’m still in love with Martha. I love and miss everything about her. I know that everything with Sam was just a rebound thing and that I have to tell Martha I’m still in love with her, even if she rejects me I still have to tell her how I still love her and want her back with me. So I’m on my way to do that now, I know I will bottle out if I don’t do it now. So here goes, I open the door and see her standing there just about to knock. “Martha, hi I was just about to come and see you!” “You were?” She asks. “Yes I was. There was something I wanted to talk to you about. Come in please.” “Ok and Jack there’s something I want to talk to you about too.” She comes in and make her a drink then we sit down to talk. “You said you wanted to tell me something, you go first. It’s ladies first after all.” “Ok, I jack” She pauses and looks at me. “Jack I want you back. I know that I finished things with you, but I love you I never stopped loving you.” “Oh Martha, I love you too and that’s what I wanted to talk to you about. I wanted you to give me another chance. I promise you, things will be different I won’t mess up again. I know how much it cost me and I’ve changed.” “You do Jack! Honestly? What about Sam?” “Yes I do and with Sam I told her the other day I couldn’t be with her when I’m still in love with someone else.” “So are we back together then?” “Yes Martha we are. I love you and you love me. We should be together.” “We should I love you Jack” She says as she moves forward and kisses me tenderly on the lips. I had missed that so much the feel of her lips on mine. I have a feeling everything is all going to be alright. We’re back together! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 yayyy!!! jack n martha r bk 2gether..... i just read the fic frm the startits really gd.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 As you can tell im very happy!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 *Woot* *Woot*, their back together cute chapter update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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