baby gurl Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 i agree soo hope its not ash's...this fic sounds 2 gd 2 b tru...lol thanx 4 dedicating it 2 me...lol i luv this fic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 Wow, 2 updates, lol, and they were both great, please update soon, I love this fic, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krystal93 Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 so kewl plz update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 Great fic, hope its not Ash's baby! Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 The baby Is Jacks because Fran Lizzie wouldn't do that? would you. Ash - He wouldn't know what to do to get any girl pregnant Great chapter! please update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Ash - He wouldn't know what to do to get any girl pregnant :lol: Gosh, your funny Sian, i hate that. Great chapter though Fran Lizzie. Yay, Baby Holden, just what this show and everyone needs Loving it Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Ash - He wouldn't know what to do to get any girl pregnant :lol: Gosh, your funny Sian, i hate that. Great chapter though Fran Lizzie. Yay, Baby Holden, just what this show and everyone needs Loving it Please update soon lol thanks, but its true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran-Lizzie Posted November 23, 2006 Report Share Posted November 23, 2006 Dedicated to gawguss_tiff, beckyboo, baby gurl, JackandMartha4eva, krystal93, shawtyy, xsianx and Jack4Martha. Part 4 Jack has blindfolded me as he leads me somewhere for my surprise, he is leading the way and I’m holding on to his hand tight. I don’t want to trip which could happen as I can’t see. We walk for a while, we keep turning corners left and right and left again I’ve lost count now. We eventually come to a stop and he takes the blindfold off me. Wow he is just such an amazing guy doing all this for me. He’s set up a picnic with loads of different foods on the beach. “Jack thank you so much, this is amazing.” “You deserve it” He says kissing me tenderly. “Now I thought I would get you lots of different things as I didn’t know what you would be craving.” “Well I haven’t had any weird ones yet I don’t think” I says grinning over at him. We sit down on a blanket he has lay down on the beach and we start to eat some of the food he had brought, sandwiches, sausage rolls etc. After we have got full up I lean again him, laying back into his arms and I smiles as he strokes me stomach softly. “Our baby is in there.” He says smiling down at me as I look up at him. I smile back and we lean forward and our lips meet in a passionate kiss. “I love you Mrs Holden.” “I love you too Mr Holden” I kiss him again and then I lay my head on his chest and listen to his heart beating. I’m just so lucky to have him back and we’re having a baby how amazing is that! I can’t wait for the scan! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted November 23, 2006 Report Share Posted November 23, 2006 awww that was so cute Jack is such a gentleman update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 23, 2006 Report Share Posted November 23, 2006 Awww Awww Awww When I was reading the about what he brought to the picnic like sausage rolls, my brother just walks into the house eating one!. I laughed. The end. I want a 'Jack' to take me on nice picnics down on a beach. The closest I will get to that is chips down the park! Romantic I'm hungry now ..... sorry about talking about me. Loved that chapter Fran-Lizzie, Hope to read mroe soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.